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Lycanthropy Cursed

“Nosferatu Revolution”

(5 of 6)

By

Brian Uhe


PAGE 1


PANEL 1

Somewhere in the city, a fire engine is heading towards some where with it’s sirens on!


PANEL 2

The right side of the gun that Mister Adams is holding is shown. In the background, Miss Carson is worried and watching, as well as wondering if Mister Adams will do it.


ALCHEMIST #8 (not shown and worried)

WHAT…. WHAT ARE YOU DOING?!


MISTER ADAMS (hand only shown and upset)

I’M NOT REALLY SURE. PERHAPS TODAY’S EVENT HAS GOTTEN TO ME AND I’M NOT IN CONTROL OF MYSELF THAT A DIRECTOR OF DEPARTMENT S.N. SHOULD BE.


MISTER ADAMS (hand only shown and upset)

IT COULD BE THAT I FINALLY REACHED MY LIMIT OF TOLERATING THE DESPICABLE ACTS OF YOU ALCHEMISTS.


PANEL 3

The outside of the building is shown, as well as the fire from above that’s coming out of the window that the alchemy books came from.


PANEL 4

Mister Adams’ gun is shown upfront, while he’s in the background.


MISTER ADAMS (serious and upset)

I KNOW WHO YOU ARE, “ALCHEMIST #8”, I KNOW YOUR REAL NAME AND THAT MAKES YOU MORE TO BLAME FOR THIS MASSACRE THEN THE OTHERS WHO I HAVE NO DOUBT HAVE MADE THEIR ESCAPE OR DOING SO RIGHT NOW.


PANEL 5

(PAST SCENE) Alchemist #8 in a robe with a hood that almost covers his face from very long ago.


PAGE 2


PANEL 1

Outside the front doors of the building, the fire engine is there, as well as some police cars. Things are being prepared by the local authorities.


MAN IN CHARGE (not shown and somewhat loud)

WHAT’S THE SITUATION?!


PANEL 2

Detective Harrison and Officer Rick are there at the scene, but are watching.


FIRE FIGHTER (not shown and somewhat loud)

WE’RE NOT REALLY SURE! SOMEONE IN THE NEIGHBORHOOD GAVE THE CALL WHEN IT HAPPENED!


PANEL 3

A closer look at Detective Harrison as he rubs his chin which says that he’s thinking.


PANEL 4

The left side of the angry Mister Adams is shown.


MISTER ADAMS (serious and upset)

YOU SAY THAT YOU HAVE SOMETHING TO TELL ME, SOMETHING IMPORTANT, BUT CHOICE YOUR WORDS WELL, BECAUSE THEY MAY BE THE ONLY THINGS THAT WILL ALLOW YOU TO LIVE A LITTLE BIT LONGER.


PANEL 5

The right side of the ashamed Alchemist #8 is shown.


ALCHEMIST #8 (ashamed)

I’M…. I’M NOT WHO YOU THINK I AM.


ALCHEMIST #8 (ashamed)

I’M NOT ALCHEMIST #8.


PANEL 6

The left side of Mister Adams is shown and he looks slightly in disbelief.


PANEL 7

Same as panel 6, but Mister Adams starts to laugh.


MISTER ADAMS (laughing and in disbelief)

UNBELIEVABLE! THIS IS WHAT YOU WANTED TO TELL ME? THAT YOU’RE NOT WHO WE ALL HERE THOUGHT YOU WERE ALL THESE YEARS, EVEN THE OTHER ALCHEMISTS?


MISTER ADAMS (laughing and in disbelief)

WITH THIS YOU PLAN TO SAVE YOURSELF FROM PERHAPS CERTAIN DEATH AND BE EXCUSED FROM YOUR SINS?


ALCHEMIST #8 (not shown)

NO, I DON’T EXPECT TO BE FORGIVEN FOR WHAT PART I HAD ON ALL THIS AND IF THERE REALLY IS A HELL, THEN I HAVE NO DOUBT THAT I’LL BE SENT THERE WHEN MY END COMES, BUT THAT WON’T CHANGE THE FACT THAT THE REAL….


PAGE 3


PANEL 1

A close view at Alchemist #8’s eyes that are filled with shock as a gun fire is heard!


PANEL 2

Thru the glass doors of the main entrance of the building, a fire fighter is about to use an ax on the glass since the doors are locked!


FIRE FIGHTER WITH AX (loud)

STAND BACK EVERYONE! I’M ABOUT TO BREAK THROUGH!


PANEL 3

The ax hits the glass, the glass begins to break!


PANEL 4

Suddenly, metal plates start to fall down in front of the doors! The fire fighter looks at this in confusion! There’s another fire fighter giving orders to others!


FIRE FIGHTER WITH AX (confused and surprised)

WHAT THE @#$%!!!


FIRE FIGHTER IN CHARGE (somewhat loud and in charge)

QUICK! WE NEED TO FIND ANOTHER WAY IN! YOU TRY TO KEEP AT IT WITH THE AX AND SEE IF YOU CAN GET THROUGH THOSE METAL PLATES!


PANEL 5

Back inside the building, Mister Adams’ gun is shown, and because there’s no smoke coming out of it, which means it’s not the one that was fired.


PANEL 6

Mister Adams’ eyes are shown with shock!


PANEL 7

Miss Carson’s eyes are shown with shock!


MISS CARSON (shocked and confused)

WHAT…. WHAT JUST HAPPENEN!?


MYSTERY MAN (not shown)

I HAPPENED.


PAGE 4


PANEL 1

The front of Alchemist #8 is shown in a way where it looks like he’s trying to stay alive!


PANEL 2

Same as panel 1, but Alchemist #8 starts to fall to the floor as he dies! A part of Doctor Williams is beginning to be shown!


PANEL 3

Mister Adams suddenly gets shot to the side which makes him drop the gun and Miss Carson goes to him!


PANEL 4

A grinning Doctor Williams with a smoking gun is shown!


MISS CARSON (not shown and loud)

DOCTOR WILLIAMS?!! WHAT IN BLAZES DO YOU THINK YOU’RE DOING?!!


DOCTOR WILLIAMS (arrogant and amused)

WAIT FOR IT.


PANEL 5

The injured Mister Dams is on the floor with Miss Carson giving him some support.


MISTER ADAMS (hurting and weak)

YOU’RE…. “COUGH!” YOU’RE THE ONE THAT ALCHEMIST #8 WAS TRYING TO TELL US ABOUT, THE REAL ALCHEMIST #8 I ASSUME.


PANEL 6

Doctor Williams spreads his arms in a way that say “Ta-Da!” to help answer Mister Adams conclusion.


DOCTOR WILLIAMS (arrogant and amused)

BINGO.


PAGE 5


PANEL 1

In another part of the building, Nos brings himself back to avoid the savage James werewolf’s claws and looks like he’s having the time of his life! He even laughs about the situation as if it’s a game!


PANEL 2

With animal-like agility, Nos does an over flip above the savage James werewolf who tries to take a bite out of him! The laughter continues!


PANEL 3

With animal-like strength, Nos kicks the savage James werewolf!


NOS (crazy, amused, and excited)

YOU’RE IT!


PANEL 4

With animal-like agility, Nos does a back flip away from the James werewolf while laughing!


PANEL 5

In the background, Nos runs for it, while the savage James werewolf goes after him!


NOS (crazy, amused, and excited)

NAY! NAY! YOU CAN’T GET ME! YOU CAN’T GET ME!


PANEL 6

A close look at the right side of the running Nos as his laughter now becomes that of a madman!


DOCTOR WILLIAMS (nor shown and word box)

NO, THAT ISN’T REALLY TRUE.


PAGE 6


PANEL 1

The injured Mister Adams and Miss Carson are on the floor in the background, while Doctor Williams is up front with his left side facing them as he looks up.


DOCTOR WILLIAMS (arrogant and deep thought)

TO TRULY BE THE REAL ALCHEMIST #8, I WOULD HAVE HAD TO BEEN PART OF THAT PATHETIC GATHERING OF WANNABE ALCHEMISTS.


DOCTOR WILLIAMS (arrogant, deep thought, and low tone)

I WOULD NEVER BEEN ABLE TO LIVE WITH MYSELF IF I WAS.


PANEL 2

The dead body of Alchemist #8 on the floor with his eyes open.


DOCTOR WILLIAMS (not shown)

THAT TITLE RIGHTFULLY BELONGS TO “BOB” WHO HOLDS THE MEMBERSHIP CARD TO THAT ESTABLISHMENT.


PANEL 3

Doctor Williams looks at the injured Mister Adams and the angry Miss Carson.


DOCTOR WILLIAMS (arrogant and amused)

OH’ BY THE WAY, ADAMS, SORRY FOR SHOOTING YOU, BUT YOU WERE REALLY BEING ANTSY WITH THAT GUN OF YOURS.


DOCTOR WILLIAMS (arrogant and amused)

AS FOR BOB, WELL, I COULDN’T AFFORD TO LET HIM TELL YOU TOO MUCH. EVEN I HAVE TO HAVE SOME SECRETS IF I’M TO SURVIVE, BUT IT’S A SHAME REALLY, THE GUY WAS PRACTICALLY A TWIN OF MY OLD FORMER SELF AND QUITE USEFUL IN FOOLING OTHERS, ESPECIALLY WITH THE SIMPLE ALCHEMY “TRICKS” I WAS ABLE TO TEACH HIM, WHILE RICHARD SIMMONS MADE THE NEW ME.


DOCTOR WILLIAMS (arrogant and amused)

IN A WAY THAT MAN’S AN ALCHEMIST HIMSELF.


PANEL 4

Miss Carson is the main focus, while Mister Adams is partly shown.


MISS CARSON (angry)

SO ALL THIS TIME, ALL THESE YEARS, YOU BEEN PRETENDING TO BE SOMEONE ELSE. BUT WHY, WHAT DO YOU HAVE TO GAIN FROM THIS?


MISS CARSON (angry)

WHAT WOULD DEPARTMENT S.N. HAVE THAT YOU WOULD WANT?


DOCTOR WILLIAMS (not shown)

OH’ I’M NOT HERE TO RETRIEVE SOMETHING, OH’ NO, I’M ACTUALLY HERE TO KEEP SOMETHING THAT’S VERY PRECIOUS TO ME.


PANEL 5

A close view of Doctor Williams head.


DOCTOR WILLIAMS (arrogant and amused)

MY LIFE.


PANEL 6

The injured Mister Adams is smiling. Miss Carson is still next to him for support.


MISTER ADAMS (hurting, weak, and amused)

IT SOUNDS TO ME THAT YOU’RE HIDING FROM SOMEONE, OR PERHAPS A PARTY OF SORTS, THAT YOU SEEM TO BE AFRAID ENOUGH TO CONCEAL YOURSELF IN A PLACE LIKE THIS.


MISTER ADAMS (hurting and weak)

IS IT BECAUSE OF REVENGE FOR ONE OF YOUR DREADFUL PAST DEEDS OR SOMEONE WANTS YOU OUT OF THE WAY BECAUSE OF YOUR REPUTATION AS A TOP NOTCH ALCHEMIST THAT MAKES YOU A THREAT TO SOME?


DOCTOR WILLIAMS (not shown)

REVENGE…. WELL, ACTUALLY A LEGACY OF REVENGE.


PAGE 7


PANEL 1

Back to Nos and James werewolf, Nos is still dodging the savage James werewolf’s claws and laughing!


NOS (crazy, amused, and excited)

COME ON, FELLA, PUT SOME FEELING TO IT!


DOCTOR WILLIAMS (not shown and word box)

YOU ALREADY KNOW ABOUT MY CONNECTIONS TO THE VAMPIRES SINCE THEY’RE LINKED TO MY PAST EXPERIMENTS IN CREATING THE ELIXIR OF LIFE, AN UNINTENDED SIDE-EFFECT TO FIND THE MEANS TO PROLONG ONE’S LIFE SPAN.


PANEL 2

With animal-like strength, Nos punches the savage James werewolf in the jaw!


DOCTOR WILLIAMS (not shown and word box)

BUT TO CONTINUE AN EXPERIMENT, TO MAKE BREAKTHROUGHS, YOU NEED AN IDEA ON HOW WELL A VERSION WORKS OR YOU’LL NEVER KNOW WHAT NEEDS TO BE DONE, AND TO DO THAT YOU NEED….


MISTER ADAMS (not shown and word box)

A HUMAN LAB RAT, ONE YOU NO DOUBT MADE FANCY PROMISES TO.


PANEL 3

Nos dunks to once again avoid the savage James werewolf’s claws!


DOCTOR WILLIAMS (not shown and word box)

VERY GOOD, ADAMS, YOU ALWAYS BEEN THE SHARP ONE.


DOCTOR WILLIAMS (not shown and word box)

YES, LONG AGO I MADE A “SOUR” DEAL WITH AN EAGER YOUNG MAN WITH THE PROMISE OF ETERNAL LIFE, BUT AT THE TIME THE SERUM WAS STILL IN DEVELOPMENT AND COULDN’T YET DELIVER THE DESIRED RESULTS.


PANEL 4

(PAST SCENE) A man on his knees, from Hunter’s Moon Experience #1, is drinking a vile of potion.


DOCTOR WILLIAMS (not shown and word box)

BUT THERE WAS NO WAY FOR ME TO ACHIEVE THOSE RESULTS UNTIL I KNEW WHAT I HAD AT THE TIME.


MISTER ADAMS (not shown and word box)

AND THAT “COUGH” ENDED UP BEING AN ABOMINATION.


PANEL 5

(PAST SCENE) The savage werebat is about to attack Alchemist #8 who’s wearing a hooded robe!


DOCTOR WILLIAMS (not shown and word box)

I’LL ADMIT THAT THE MAN, EVEN THOUGH HE WAS NOT MUCH THAT ANYMORE, WAS VERY DISPLEASED TO WHAT HAPPENED TO HIM AND I WAS VERY LUCKY TO GET OUT OF THERE ALIVE, AND EVEN LUCKIER TO LEARN WHAT I NEEDED TO LEARN TO PERFECT THE ELIXIR, WHICH I MYSELF AM PROOF OF THAT.


MISTER ADAMS (not shown, angry, and word box)

LUCKY?!!


PAGE 8


PANEL 1

A part of Doctor Williams is shown up front, while Mister Adams and Miss Carson is shown in the background!


MISTER ADAMS (hurting, weak, and angry)

DO YOU “COUGH” DO YOU REALIZE HOW MANY PEOPLE’S LIVES WERE LOST OR RUINED BECAUSE OF A PLAGUE YOU STARTED SO YOU COULD LIVE LONGER, AND YOU HAVE THE NERVE TO SAY THAT YOU’RE LUCKY?!


DOCTOR WILLIAMS (arrogant and uncaring)

YOU WANT ME TO ADMIT IT? THEN FINE, I’M A SICK MINDED BASTARD WHO HAS MADE THE ULTIMATE SIN.


DOCTOR WILLIAMS (arrogant and uncaring)

HAPPY?


PANEL 2

A close view at Miss Carson.


MISS CARSON (confused and nervous)

I DON’T UNDERSTAND THIS. YOU SAY THAT DOCTOR WILLIAMS, HEAD OF RESEARCH, WAS A WAY FOR YOU TO HIDE FROM SOMEONE WHO WANTS REVENGE, BUT WHO IS IT THAT WANTS REVENGE?


PANEL 3

Same as panel 2, but Miss Carson looks at Mister Adams’ direction.


MISTER ADAMS (partly shown, hurting, and weak)

IT’S THE FIRST VAMPIRE OF COURSE.


PANEL 4

Doctor Williams’ hand that’s pointing up is shown upfront, while Mister Adams and Miss Carson are in the background.


DOCTOR WILLIAMS (hand only shown)

IT “WAS” THE FIRST VAMPIRE. REMEMBER, I SAID IT WAS A LEGACY OF REVENGE.


PANEL 5

Elsewhere in the building, the silver knights are fighting more vampires!


DOCTOR WILLIAMS (not shown and word box)

OUR FINAL BATTLE WAS IN 1476, WHERE I USED SOMETHING SIMILAR TO WHAT BOB HAD WITH HIS PERSON, BUT THE LEVEL OF EXPOSURE TO THE SILVER MIST WASN’T ENOUGH TO KILL HIM IMMEDIATELY.


DOCTOR WILLIAMS (not shown, low tone, and word box)

YOU CAN’T IMAGINE HOW DIFFICULT IT IS TO MAKE THAT STUFF BECAUSE OF THE NEGATIVE EFFECTS SILVER HAS ON ALCHEMY AND YOU HAVE TO USE IT AFTER IT’S MADE SINCE IT EXPIRES IN A FEW HOURS.


PAGE 9


PANEL 1

Elsewhere in the building, the Savage Edward werewolf attacks more vampires!


DOCTOR WILLIAMS (not shown and word box)

BACK TO THE SUBJECT, WITH THE TIME HE HAD LEFT, HE WENT TO A STUDENT OF HIS WHO HE TAUGHT THE ARTS OF CONTROLLING MANY PEOPLE THROUGH FEAR AND CRUELTY, BUT SADLY DIDN’T LEARN WELL ENOUGH TO MAINTAIN THAT CONTROL.


PANEL 2

The savage Sam werewolf is taking a bite out of a vampire!


DOCTOR WILLIAMS (not shown and word box)

SO TO GIVE HIM A SECOND CHANCE TO MAKE THE EFFORT HE PUT ON HIM TO NOT BE A WASTE OF TIME, HE BIT HIM, INFECTED HIM SO TO MAKE THIS PERSON LIKE HIM AND MAKE HIM CONTINUE HIS QUEST FOR REVENGE AFTER HE WAS GONE.


PANEL 3

The savage Ralph werewolf is till struggling with the vampires on him!


DOCTOR WILLIAMS (not shown and word box)

DESPITE THIS MAN’S ABILITY TO BE CRUEL WITHOUT REMORSE, HE DID HAVE A CODE OF HONOR WHICH FORCED HIM TO DO THIS AND HIS CHANGE DID RESULT IN RUMORS OF MYSTERIOUS DEATHS AT HIS CASTLE, BUT IRONICALLY MOSTLY NEVER ABOUT VAMPIRES, EVEN THOUGH HIS COUNTRY DID HAVE FOLKLORES ABOUT THEM.


VAMPIRE #1 (loud, crazy, and enraged)

KILL IT! KILL IT!!!


PANEL 4

The savage James werewolf leaps towards the madman laughing Nos.


MISS CARSON (not shown and word box)

WAIT A MINUTE…. YOU CAN’T BE TALKING ABOUT…. I MEAN HE EXISTED, BUT NEVER AS A VAMPIRE…. THAT WAS BASED ON A FICTIONAL BOOK…. ARE YOU SAYING THAT IT’S HIM WHO’S AFTER YOU?!


PANEL 5

Back to Doctor Williams, The back head of Miss Carson is shown upfront.


DOCTOR WILLIAMS (arrogant and amused)

REMEMBER WHERE YOU ARE, MISS CARSON, DEPARTMENT S.N., WHICH EXISTS BECAUSE OF WEREWOLVES, VAMPIRES, AND OTHER THINGS THAT BUMP IN THE NIGHT ARE NOT LIMITED TO MOVIES AND BOOKS WHEN IT COME TO EXISTENCE AND THE SAME GOES FOR HIM.


MISTER ADAMS (not shown, hurting, and weak)

ALL THANKS TO YOU AND THE OTHER BLASTED ALCHEMISTS.


PAGE 10


PANEL 1

They three figures are displayed are Boris Karloff as Frankenstein’s monster, Bela Lugosi as Dracula, and Lon Chaney Jr. as the Wolf Man.


DOCTOR WILLIAMS (not shown and word box)

TOUCHE…. BUT I WILL ADMIT THAT I FIND IT AMUSING THAT WE STARTED A LONG LASTING FAN FOLLOWING OF MONSTERS.


PANEL 2

A part of Doctor Williams is shown, while Miss Carson and Mister Adams are in the background.


MISS CARSON (confused and worried)

BUT IT CAN’T BE HIM! THE MAN IS DEAD! HISTORY INDICATES….!


DOCTOR WILLIAMS (partly shown, arrogant, and amused)

THAT’S THE PROBLEM WITH HISTORY, IT’S USUALLY MADE OUT OF LEGENDS, INSTEAD OF ACTUAL FACTS OF LONG AGO, BECAUSE IT’S SO HARD TO HOLD ONTO, BUT THERE IS THE PART ABOUT AN EMPTY COFFIN.


MISTER ADAMS (hurting and weak)

LEAVE HER ALONE.


DOCTOR WILLIAMS (partly shown, arrogant, and amused)

COME ON, MISS CARSON, BY NOW YOU KNOW WHO WE’RE TALKING ABOUT AND ALL IT TAKES IS TWO WORDS TO REVEAL IT.


PANEL 3

Doctor Williams’ fiendish smile is shown.


DOCTOR WILLIAMS (mouth only shown)

THE IMPALER.


PANEL 4

The famous painting of Vlad the Impaler is shown.

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Image:Vladtepes.jpg


PANEL 5

Doctor Williams looks like he’s about to leave. He’s waving his gun upwards, while looking up and a little disappointed.


DOCTOR WILLIAMS (arrogant and a little disappointed)

SADLY, AND I AM TRULY SAD ABOUT THIS, BUT BECAUSE OF HIM AND WHAT’S GOING ON HERE, AND THE FACT THAT THE SURVIVORS WILL NO DOUBT BECOME TARGETS BY ALCHEMIST #1’S ORDERS, INCLUDING DOCTOR WILLIAMS, I’M AFRAID I MUST MOVE ON.


DOCTOR WILLIAMS (arrogant and a little disappointed)

AND THIS PLACE WAS FEELING SO MUCH LIKE A HOME WITH IT’S ADVANCED SECURITY TO MAKE IT FEEL, WELL, SECURED, AND THE YOUNG ASSISTANTS FOR ME TO INSULT TO MAKE ME FEEL BIG AND MIGHTY, THEN OF COARSE THERE’S BOB WHO FOOLED THE OTHERS INTO THINKING THEY HAD ME UNDER THEIR CONTROL, BUT CAN’T DO THAT ANYMORE NOW THAT HE’S DEAD.


DOCTOR WILLIAMS (arrogant and a little disappointed)

I SHALL TRULY “TRULY” MISS THIS PLACE.


MISTER ADAMS (not shown, hurting, and weak)

GO TO HELL.


DOCTOR WILLIAMS (arrogant and a little disappointed)

NO…. NO…. I THINK I’LL GO TO A MUCH PLEASANT PLACE, BUT THANKS FOR THE RECOMMENDATION.


PAGE 11


PANEL 1

Doctor Williams is now leaving Mister Adams and Miss Carson.


DOCTOR WILLIAMS (arrogant and amused)

WELL, I’M OFF TO NEW FRONTIERS AND AGAIN SORRY ABOUT THE GUN WOUND.


MISS CARSON (confused and nervous)

WAIT A MINUTE!


PANEL 2

Miss Carson’s head is the main focus.


MISS CARSON (confused and nervous)

WHO ARE YOU…. REALLY?


PANEL 3

The injured Mister Adams is the main focus.


MISTER ADAMS (hurting and weak)

NICHOLAS FLAMEL.


PANEL 4

A picture of Flamel.

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Image:Nicholasflamel.png


PANEL 5

Miss Carson and the injured Mister Adams is shown on the left side of the panel, while Doctor Williams is shown on the right side and is bowing like a gentleman.


MISS CARSON (confused and nervous)

THE FRENCH ALCHEMIST?


DOCTOR WILLIAMS (arrogant and amused)

LE PLAISIR EST LE MIEN, MADAME.


DOCTOR WILLIAMS (arrogant and amused)

SUCCESSFUL MAKER OF THE PHILOSOPHER’S STONE, A SECRET WHICH THIS ESTABLISHMENT’S ALCHEMISTS RECEIVED FROM BOB AS MORE MISGUIDING PROOF OF HIS IDENTITY AND USED TO FUND IT WITH IT’S ABILITY TO TURN LEAD INTO GOLD, AS WELL AS THE ELIXIR OF LIFE THAT I SHARED WITH MY WIFE, PERENELLE, WHO HAD DECIDED TO SEPARATE FROM MY PRESENCE SINCE SHE DIDN’T LIKE THE KIND OF PERSON I WAS BECOMING, TO HER POINT OF VIEW OF COARSE, SHORTLY AFTER FAKING MY DEATH TO MEET UP WITH HER IN 1410 WHERE I HIRED A PERSON TO PRETEND THAT HE WAS MY “DECEASED” WIFE’S NEPHEW SO HE COULD MOVE MY PERSONAL BELONGS TO MY NEW LIVING QUARTERS FROM AFAR.


PAGE 12


PANEL 1

Miss Carson and Mister Adams become the main focus.


MISS CARSON (confused and nervous)

BUT VAMPIRES FIRST APPEARED IN 1190 .


DOCTOR WILLIAMS (not shown)

HOW CAN A MAN WHO’S SUPPOSE TO HAVE BEEN BORN IN 1330 BE THE CREATOR OF THE VAMPIRE THREAT?


PANEL 2

Doctor Williams’ head and shoulders are the main focus and he’s smirking.


DOCTOR WILLIAMS (arrogant and amused)

AS I SAID BEFORE, HISTORY IS USUALLY MADE OUT OF LEGENDS.


PANEL 3

Doctor Williams is now starting to leave once again and Miss Carson and Mister Adams is in the background.


PANEL 4

Same as panel 3, but Doctor Williams isn’t shown.


DOCTOR WILLIAMS (not shown)

OH’ BY THE WAY. THAT GUY WHO SUCCESSFULLY RESURRECTED A WEREWOLF FROM THE DEAD ALMOST 100 YEARS AGO.


PANEL 5

Same as panel 4.


DOCTOR WILLIAMS (not shown)

THAT WAS ME.


PAGE 13


PANEL 1

Elsewhere in the building and from a somewhat distance, Nos and the savage James werewolf goes through a wall in a way where it seems that the werewolf tackles Nos from behind, but Nos doesn’t look worried!


NOS (crazy, amused, loud, and excited)

WEEEEEE!!!


PANEL 2

Nos and the savage James werewolf roll around the floor and the werewolf starts to lose his grip on Nos!


PANEL 3

Nos reveals animal-like agility as he leaps off the wall while getting away from the savage James werewolf who’s partly shown! The madman laughter begins again!


PANEL 4

Nos is on the left side of the panel as he turns his head around to look at his opponent and ready for action, while the savage James werewolf in on the right!


NOS (crazy and amused)

YOU KNOW, I WAS PLANNING TO ATTACK THIS PLACE WHEN THERE WASN’T A FULL MOON, BUT IT TURNS OUT THAT MY “PARTNER” PLANNED TO BETRAY ME AND NO DOUBT WAS HOPING WE WOULD KILL EACH OTHER OFF, SINCE HE SEEMS TO THINK HE’S HOLIER THEN THOU THEN EVERYONE ELSE, AND OF COURSE THERE’S ME FOR NOT PAYING ATTENTION TO STUFF!


PANEL 5

Nos’ evil eyes are the main focus!


NOS (eyes only shown, crazy, and amused)

BUT YOU KNOW WHAT? I’M LIKE HAVING THE DAMNEST TIME OF MY LIFE!


PANEL 6

The opened mouth and teeth of the savage James werewolf is the main focus! A roar is made!


PAGE 14


PANEL 1

Elsewhere in the building, a vampire gets stabbed into the chest by a silver sword!


FATHER JOHNSON (not shown)

MAY ETERNAL DAMNATION BE YOUR JUST AWARD!


PANEL 2

Father Johnson is shown with sword!


FATHER JOHNSON (arrogant and believes to be righteous)

FOR THAT IS THE FINAL JUDGMENT FROM GOD TO ALL WHO ARE SPAWNS OF SATAN!


PANEL 3

Father Johnson beheads another vampire with his sword!


FATHER JOHNSON (arrogant and believes to be righteous)

THE LORD GIVES ME STRENGTH TO VANQUISH THEE!


PANEL 4

The sword is shown next to Father Johnson’s head.


FATHER JOHNSON (arrogant and believes to be righteous)

AND SOMEDAY MY BROTHERS IN ARMS WILL ARRIVE TO THIS PLACE OF SIN AND PURIFY IT!


PANEL 5

Father Johnson walks into the shadows.


FATHER JOHNSON (arrogant and believes to be righteous)

FOR THIS IS WHAT GOD COMMANDS!


PAGE 15


PANEL 1

Elsewhere in the building, the savage Sam werewolf is chasing two scared vampires who are running for their lives!


VAMPIRE #1 (panicking and loud)

THIS ISN’T WHAT NOS PROMISED US! HE ASSURED US THAT WE WOULD DEFEAT THE HUNTERS WITH NO PROBLEM!


VAMPIRE #2 (panicking and loud)

WHERE IS NOS?! WHAT WON’T HE SAVE US FROM THESE BEASTS?!


PANEL 2

The savage Sam werewolf leaps between them with animal-like athletic ability!


PANEL 3

The savage Sam werewolf is now in front of the two vampires and turns around to face them! The two vampires are shocked by this!


VAMPIRE #2 (panicking and loud)

NO!


PANEL 4

The savage Sam werewolf attacks Vampire #2, while vampire #1 watches in horror! A growl is heard!


VAMPIRE #2 (panicking and loud)

NOOOOOOO!!!


PANEL 5

Vampire #1 runs to save himself, while vampire #2’s screams of pain and terror are heard!


VAMPIRE #1 (panicking and though balloon)

NO! I DON’T WANT THAT TO HAPPEN TO ME! NOT TO ME! NOS WHERE ARE YOU?!


VAMPIRE #1 (panicking and thought balloon)

WHY WON’T YOU SAVE US?!!


PANEL 6

(COLOR BLIND SCENE) As if looking thru the eyes of the Sam werewolf, at animal-like speed, the Sam werewolf head towards the terrified vampire #1 as he looks behind to see his death!


PAGE 16


PANEL 1

Elsewhere in the building, the silver knights are still fighting vampires who seem really determined to kill the hunters for the horrors they put them thru with their hunting of them, to their point of view! The silver knights are in a defense circle!


SANDY’S SILVER KNIGHT (in charge and determined)

STAND YOUR GROUND AND KEEP THE DEFENSE CIRCLE INTACT!


EDWARD’S SILVER KNIGHT (determined)

MAN, THESE FREAKS REALLY WANT US DEAD!


JULIE (determined)

NO DOUBT BECAUSE WE’VE BEEN HUNTING AND KILLING THEM, AS WELL AS SOMETIMES LETTING THE WEREWOLVES HAVE THEM, AND THEY SEE THIS AS THEIR MOMENT OF GETTING SWEET REVENGE ON US!


EDWARD’S SILVER KNIGHT (determined)

SUCKS TO BE US!


JULIE (determined)

DAMN RIGHT IT DOES!


PANEL 2

Julie slits the throat of a vampire with the silver blade at the end of her staff in a skillful way!


PANEL 3

Edward’s silver knight stabs a vampire in the fore head with the silver blade of his staff!


PAGE 17


PANEL 1

Back to Mister Adams and Miss Carson, Mister Adams is trying to get up, while Miss Carson he helping him.


MISS CARSON (scared and concern)

YOU SHOULDN’T GET UP! YOU’RE SERIOUSLY INJURED!


MISTER ADAMS (hurting, weak, but determined)

I REFUSE TO LET THEM WIN THIS!


MISTER ADAMS (hurting, weak, but determined)

I REFUSE TO LET THEM GET AWAY WITH THIS TRAGEDY AND ALLOW THEM TO MAKE THIS AS EVIDENCE THAT THEY CAN GET AWAY WITH ANYTHING!


PANEL 2

Alchemist #1 is shown.


PANEL 3

Alchemist #2 is shown.


PANEL 4

Alchemist #3 is shown.


PANEL 5

Alchemist #4 is shown.


PANEL 6

Alchemist #5 is shown.


PANEL 7

Alchemist #6 is shown.


PANEL 8

Alchemist #7 is shown.


PANEL 9

Alchemist #8 is shown.


PANEL 10

Doctor Williams with his arrogant smile is shown.


MISTER ADAMS (not shown and word box)

ESPECIALLY THAT SON OF A BITCH WHO’S BEEN PLAYING US FOR FOOLS!


PAGE 18


PANEL 1

Back to Nos, the back, and hand, of Nos’ is shown he has a hand gun!


NOS (hand and back only shown)

PICKED SOMETHING UP FROM ONE OF THOSE FANCY SECURITY GUARDS!


NOS (hand and back only shown and direct)

WANNA SEE?!


PANEL 2

Nos fires the hand gun while laughing like a madman!


PANEL 3

With animal-like agility, the savage James werewolf dodges the shots! The madman laughter is heard!


PANEL 4

 The savage James werewolf attacks Nos and makes him drop the gun!


NOS (crazy, amused, and excited)

AW! AND I WAS HAVING FUN WITH THAT!


PANEL 5

Nos’s hands are shown grabbing for the James werewolf’s hind legs!


PANEL 6

Nos brings the savage James werewolf’s hind legs up to make it fall back in a dramatic way!


NOS (crazy, amused, and excited)

OPPSY DAISY!


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PANEL 1

The James werewolf hits a wall!


PANEL 2

The savage James werewolf gets up and gives an angry growl!


NOS (not shown)

YOU KNOW, EVEN THOUGH THIS HAS BEEN BIG TIME FUN, SADLY THERE COMES A TIME WHEN PLAYTIME HAS TO END AND ONE HAS TO GO BACK TO WORK OR IT’LL NEVER GET DONE.


NOS (not shown)

BESIDES, I’M STARTING TO GET TIRED HERE.


PANEL 3

Nos’ right arm is shown and out from the sleeve is a silver blade that shoots out!


NOS (arm only shown)

COME HERE, SWEET STUFF, DADDY HAS SOMETHING FOR YA!


PANEL 4

The savage James werewolf attacks Nos and Nos swings the silver blade and cuts the werewolf!


PANEL 5

The injured and hurt James werewolf falls to the floor and next to Nos’ feet!


NOS (feet only shown)

DON’T USUALLY USE SILVER WEAPONS, DON’T EVEN LIKE TO BE NEAR THEM, BUT THIS WAS A SPECIAL OCCASION AND NOTHING BUT THE BEST FOR MY VICTIMS ON THIS SPECIAL DAY.


PANEL 6

The back of Nos’ is show as he turns around to see where the growling from a new source is.


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PANEL 1

The hand of the Edward werewolf that looks like it’s claws are about to be used!


PANEL 2

The teeth of the savage Edward werewolf is shown!


NOS (not shown)

MY, WHAT BIG TEETH YOU HAVE, GRANDMA.


PANEL 3

Upfront, the savage Edward werewolf starts to walk around it’s prey as if ready to attack, while in the background Nos watches.


NOS (crazy, amused, and a little tired)

I GUESS IT’S OBVIOUS THAT I WOULD RUN IN WITH ANOTHER OF YOU FUR-BALLS AND HERE I AM WORN OUT BY THIS ONE.


NOS (crazy, amused, and a little tired)

OH’ WOE IS ME. BOO! HOO!


PANEL 4

The right/front side of Nos’s head and shoulders.


NOS (crazy, amused, and a little tired)

GUESS I HAVE NO CHOICE BUT TO BECOME SOMETHING ELSE AND LUCKILY I KEPT MYSELF FROM FEEDING FOR A LONG WHILE JUST IN CASE AND OF COURSE THE OTHERS FEEDING WHILE NEAR ME DOES HELP A BIT.


PANEL 5

The left side of the savage Edward werewolf’s head and shoulders.


NOS (not shown)

AND THIS SOMETHING THAT IS JUST AS POWERFUL, AND “UNCONTROLLABLY SAVAGE”, AS YOU THAT ONLY THE THIRST UNRESTRAINED CAN BRING OUT!


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PANEL 1

Nos begins the transformation of becoming a werebat! His appearance is still mostly human-like, but there’s slight evidence of change!


NOS (crazy, amused, and stress)

AND ONCE “UGH!” THIS IS OVER!


PANEL 2

Nos’ transformation into a werebat becomes even greater as he starts to tear thru his clothing! Wings start to grow!


NOS (crazy, amused, and stress)

ONCE “NAGH!” EVERYTHING THAT NEEDS TO BE DONE IS DONE!


PANEL 3

Nos is halfway of becoming a werebat!


NOS (crazy, amused, stress, and animal voice)

I’LL FINALLY HAVE THE “GRRRR!” FREEDOM TO ABANDON THE NAME NOS AND CLAIM THE NAME OF MY SOON TO BE TRUE SELF!


PANEL 4

The vampire from the 1922 silent movie Nosferatu is shown.


PANEL 5

Nos is “almost” a full werebat!


NOS (crazy, stress, animal voice, and direct)

ORLOK!


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PANEL 1

A part of the savage Edward werewolf is shown upfront as it looks at the psychotic Nos werebat with badly torn clothes as it spreads it’s wings and gives off a savage screech!


TO BE CONTINUED