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Lycanthropy Cursed

“Hunter’s Moon Experience”

(5 of 6)

By

Brian Uhe


PAGE 1


PANEL 1

It’s nighttime and people in the city are shown walking next to the shops and restaurants.


PANEL 2

Among the crowd are Sam and Sandy.


PANEL 3

Sam and Sandy walk away from the crowd.


PANEL 4

Something attracts Sam and Sandy’s interest.


PANEL 5

The convenience store where Nos had his fun in Hunter’s Moon Experience #3 is shown with more police cars and officers there to investigate. There’s a crowd that’s watching out of curiosity.


PAGE 2


PANEL 1

Detective Harrison and Officer Rick are at the crime scene and are about to enter the convenience store.


DETECTIVE HARRISON (chilling)

PREPARE YOURSELF, KID, BECAUSE IF THIS HAS SOMETHING TO DO WITH OUR CASE, THEN THERE’S A GOOD CHANCE THAT’S IT’S GOING TO BE DARN RIGHT UGLY.


PANEL 2

Detective Harrison looks at the mess and Officer Rick, who’s behind him, looks like he’s about to hurl.


PANEL 3

Same as panel 2, but Officer Rick runs off somewhere in the store to barf.


DETECTIVE HARRISON (chilling)

YEP…. I’D SAY I’M BEGINNING TO SEE A CONNECTION HERE.


PANEL 4

A part of Detective Harrison’s back head is shown as he looks at the bloody mess that Nos left. Barfing sounds are heard.


DETECTIVE HARRISON (partly shown and chilling)

AFTER YOU’RE DONE WITH SEEING YOU’RE DINNER AGAIN, WE’LL LOOK AROUND TO SEE WHAT ALL THIS WILL TELL US ABOUT WHAT HAPPEN HERE AND WHERE TO GO NEXT, OK, ROOKIE?


PANEL 5

The sick Officer Rick is wiping his mouth with his hand.


OFFICER RICK (sick and woozy)

Y….YES, SIR.


PAGE 3


PANEL 1

Some lady is outside sweeping the steps of the front door of the building that she lives in.


PANEL 2

The lady hears Edward’s (not shown) scream of terror, but doesn’t know where it’s coming from!


LADY (shocked)

WHAT IN THE HELL IS THAT?!


PANEL 3

The lady’s back is shown as she looks to her left and upwards, since the screams seem to come from above! She sees nothing and Edward’s screams of terror are still heard!


PANEL 4

Same as panel 3, but now the lady is looking to her right, but still sees nothing while the screams still happen!


PANEL 5

The front of the lady is shown and she looks focused on listening at the screams of terror that are starting to fade away!


PANEL 6

Same as panel 5, but the lady goes back to her sweeping as if she doesn’t care anymore.


LADY (not caring)

IT’S NOT LIKE I CAN GROW WINGS AND FLY UP THERE TO SEE WHAT’S GOING ON.


LADY (not caring)

THIS CITY SEEMS TO GET CRAZIER EACH YEAR AS IF IT WAS ONE VERY BIG LOONEY BIN.


PAGE 4


PANEL 1

Back to the convenience store crime scene, Sam and Sandy are shown with the crowd that’s watching behind the yellow police tape.


PANEL 2

Sam is a little startle from what she hears from Sandy.


SANDY (not shown)

THE LORD WILL WIN THIS BATTLE FOR WE ARE HIS TOOLS, EVEN THOUGH CORRUPTED WITH SIN WE ARE.


PANEL 3

Sam looks down at the smaller Sandy, while Sandy looks back at her.


SAM (chilling and a little annoyed)

DON’T DO THAT.


SANDY (a little confused)

DO WHAT?


SAM (chilling and a little annoyed)

MAKE EVERYTHING BIBLICAL AS IF LIFE WAS THAT SIMPLE.


SANDY (a little confused)

BUT….


SAM (chilling and a little annoyed)

BUT FATHER JOHNSON SAYS THIS AND THAT BECAUSE HE’S “SO” RIGHTEOUS.


PANEL 4

Sam starts to walk away as if she has lost interest of the crime scene. Sandy is still there watching her walk away.


SAM (chilling and a little annoyed)

GOT NEWS FOR YOU, LITTLE GIRL, BAD THINGS CAN HAPPEN TO GOOD PEOPLE FOR NO REASON, AND IT DOESN’T HAVE TO HAVE ANYTHING TO DO WITH GOD. IT’S BEEN HAPPENING FOR A VERY LONG TIME AND IT JUST HAPPENED HERE.


PANEL 5

Sandy is shown with inner anger for Sam, but tries to keep it in for the reason why she’s here with Sam.


SAM (not shown)

OR DO YOU THINK THAT THOSE COPS WHO WERE SLAUGHTERED DESERVED WHAT THEY GOT, THAT THEY WERE SINNERS THAT GOD DECIDED SHOULD BE PUNISHED WITH THEIR LIVES?


PANEL 6

Sam is still walking away, but now Sandy is following her now.


SAM (chilling)

YOUR FATHER JOHNSON WOULD PROBABLY SAY YES SINCE ALL HE DOES IS TRY TO SEE THE BAD THINGS IN PEOPLE, INSTEAD OF HIS OWN, BECAUSE ALL HE REALLY CARES ABOUT IS HIS DELUSIONS OF BEING SOME HOLY SERVANT OF GOD.


SANDY (trying to hold back her anger)

FATHER JOHNSON IS….


SAM (chilling)

HE DOESN’T CARE ABOUT YOU, SANDY, AND EVERYTHING HE HAS SAID TO YOU SO FAR HAD THE PURPOSE OF KEEPING YOU AS HIS BLINDLY LOYAL FLUNKY WHO DOES HIS DIRTY WORK SO HE CAN KEEP HIS HANDS CLEAN AND NEVER HAVING TO ACCEPT RESPONSIBILITY.


SAM (chilling)

DEEP INSIDE YOU KNOW THAT, BUT THE PROBLEM IS THAT YOU SO BADLY WANT TO BELIEVE THAT HE’LL SAVE YOUR SOUL AS IF IT’S A TERRIBLE SIN OF BEING A VICTIM.


PAGE 5


PANEL 1

A close look at the angry Sandy.


SANDY (thought balloon and trying to hold in her rage)

THAT BITCH! THAT GODLESS WHORE! I SO BADLY WANT TO STRIKE HER DOWN AND SEND HER BACK TO THE PITS OF HELL, BUT FATHER JOHNSON OBVIOUSLY HAS SOME KIND OF PLAN WHICH WILL RID OUR TAINTED KIND ONCE AND FOR ALL!


SANDY (thought balloon and trying to hold in her rage)

I…. I HAVE TO FOLLOW HIS COMMANDS AND TOLERATE PEOPLE LIKE HER OR I MAY END UP RUINING EVERYTHING.


PANEL 2

As if looking thru Sandy’s eyes, the walking Sam’s back is shown.


PANEL 3

Sandy’s head and face is shown as she tries to stay her anger calm and focuses on her “mission”. She continues to follow Sam.


PANEL 4

Sandy’s right side of her head and shoulders are shown as she looks shocked.


SAM (not shown)

I KNOW YOU’RE HERE BECAUSE OF FATHER JOHNSON, SANDY, THAT HE WANTS YOU TO SPY ON US AND FIND ANYTHING ABOUT US THAT HE CAN USE AND EDIT IN HIS SO CALLED HOLY CAUSE…. TO HAVE YOU DO…. “HIS DIRTY WORK”.  


PANEL 5

Sandy just stands there in shock as Sam continues to walk away.


SAM (chilling)

I’M AFRAID US “DEMON SPAWNS” AREN’T AS DIM-WITTED AS YOU WOULD LIKE US TO BE…. BUT HEY, YOU’RE MORE THEN WELCOME TO COME ALONG AND OBSERVE HOW “CORRUPTED” I AM.


SAM (chilling)

I MEAN THE LAST THING YOU WANT TO DO IS DISAPPOINT THE GOOD FATHER.


PAGE 6


PANEL 1

From far away, the flying savage Feather werebat is still holding by the feet the terrified Edward who’s still screaming in terror!


PANEL 2

(COLOR BLIND SCENE) As if looking thru the eyes of the Feather werebat, the roof of a building is shown coming closer at flight speed! Edward’s screaming of terror is still heard!


PANEL 3

Edward is now rolling on the roof because the Feather werebat let him go!


PANEL 4

The Feather werebat’s hind feet are about to touch the roof.


PANEL 5

Edward has stopped rolling at look at the direction of the Feather werebat and looks terrified as if he surely believes that he will soon receive a most horrifying death!


EDWARD (terrified and low tone)

OH’ MY GOD!


PANEL 6

A part of the savage Feather werebat’s head is shown, as well as the eyes that say that the creature is thirsty for blood! The Feather werebat makes a hiss!


PAGE 7


PANEL 1

The savage Feather werebat starts to attack the helpless Edward because of her uncontrollable craving for blood!


PANEL 2

The Feather werebats’ head is close to the terrified Edward who has his arms in front of him, but stops and has a facial expression that says that she’s fighting the urge!


PANEL 3

The Feather werebat tries to force herself away from the terrified, and now confused, Edward!


PANEL 4

One of the lens of Edward’s glasses show a reflection of the barely self-restraining Feather werebat as she roars and tries to transform back!


PAGE 8


PANEL 1

The desperate Feather werebat starts to revert back to human form! She is on all fours and looks as if she’s fighting herself!


PANEL 2

The wings are shrinking back into the arms as the desperate Feather werebat struggles to head towards the direction where her clothes are!


PANEL 3

She’s reverting closer to normal while desperately struggling to get closer to her clothes!


PANEL 4

The desperate Feather werebat now looks mostly human as she takes a bite on the packet of blood to suppress the inhuman thirst before it’s too late!


PANEL 5

The eyes of the now human Feather are shown and are somewhat covered by her long hair. Feather is breathing heavy.


PANEL 6

The still terrified and confused Edward is shown.


PAGE 9


PANEL 1

The nude Feather is now standing and looking at Edward’s direction. She has blood around her mouth.


FEATHER (serious)

I BELIEVE AFTER SEEING THAT, YOU NOW HAVE A BETTER UNDERSTANDING ON WHAT IT LOOKS LIKE WHEN YOU REVERT BACK FROM WOLF TO HUMAN, EXCEPT YOU GO ALL THE WAY BACK TO BEING HUMAN, WHILE PEOPLE LIKE ME ARE STILL A LITTLE BIT BAT NO MATTER HOW MUCH BLOOD WE CONSUME.


PANEL 2

Part of Feather’s mouth is shown as she raises apart her lips to reveal one of the fangs. The blood is still there.


FEATHER (mouth only shown)

WHICH I BELIEVE YOU ALREADY FOUND OUT BY LOOKING AT THE DENTURES.


PANEL 3

The naked Feather starts to pick up her clothes. Her back is shown.


PANEL 4

Same as panel 3, but she stops and turns her head to look at Edward’s direction.


FEATHER (serious)

MIND BEING A GENTLEMAN AND TURN YOUR HEAD SO I CAN KEEP SOME OF MY MODESTY AND NOT FEEL LIKE A SEX OBJECT?


PANEL 5

The scared Edward does as she says by turning his head away in hopes that this will buy him extra minutes to what he believes is his last night of being alive.


PANEL 6

Feather is putting back on her clothes. Shadow somewhat covers her.


FEATHER (serious)

SORRY ABOUT THAT SCARE, BUT TURNING INTO THAT BEAST DOES HAVE SOME RISKS LIKE HAVING LESS CONTROL OVER THE IMPULSE TO FEED, WHICH IS WHY I MAKE MYSELF FAMILIAR TO THE AREAS THAT HAVE SECRET BLOOD BANKS TO KEEP MYSELF IN CONTROL.


FEATHER (serious)

WHILE OTHERS ARE JUST PLAIN SICK AND PSYCHOTIC LIKE A GUY WHO MADE A DISTURBING SPEECH TO A BUNCH OF OTHER VAMPIRES AND IS WILLING TO KILL FOR IT JUST TO FEEL SUPERIOR.


PAGE 10


PANEL 1

Feather finishes putting on her jacket while looking at Edward who’s partly shown and still looking away for fear of his life.


FEATHER (serious)

BUT I DIDN’T BRING YOU UP HERE TO DISCUSS THE POLITICS AND COMMUNITY STANDARDS OF VAMPIRES, NO, THIS ABOUT ME GETTING ANSWERS I NEED TO FIND ONE PARTICULAR PERSON WHO’S VERY HUMAN EVEN THOUGH HIS SINS ARE AT THE LEVEL OF A MONSTER.


FEATHER (serious)

IT’S NOW SAFE TO LOOK AT ME.


PANEL 2

Edward does as she says and to his surprise, Feather face is close to his as they look closely eye to eye. Her serious look gives Edward the creeps.


FEATHER (serious)

LET’S GO STRAIGHT TO THE POINT,….UH.


EDWARD (nervous)

E….EDWARD.


FEATHER (serious)

EDWARD.


FEATHER (serious)

I’M TAKING A BIG RISK HERE, A VERY BIG RISK, BECAUSE THANKS TO THAT SPEECH MAKER I JUST MENTIONED, A CHAINSAW HAS LIKE BEEN USED ON MY TIME TABLE AND TURNED IT INTO SAW DUST, SO I’M IN NO MOOD FOR ANY MORE ANNOYING SCREAMS. THE ONLY NOISES I WANT FROM YOU ARE THE ONES THAT SOUND LIKE WORDS, GOT IT?


EDWARD (nervous)

Y….YES.


PANEL 3

Same as panel 2, but Feather starts to make sniffing sounds as Edward’s scent tells her something and she’s surprised.


FEATHER (surprised)

WAIT A MINUTE! YOU…. YOU’RE THE NEW GUY!


PANEL 4

A past scene of the Edward werewolf in page 16 of Hunter’s Moon Experience #2 where he’s next to his vampire victim.


FEATHER (not shown and word box)

I SAW YOU WITH THE REST WHEN THEY WERE TAKING DOWN ONE OF THE NESTS IN THE WEST SIDE OF THE CITY AND I KNEW THAT YOU WERE NEW BECAUSE OF THE COLOR OF YOUR FUR, BUT I DIDN’T KNOW WHAT YOU LOOKED LIKE AS A HUMAN UNTIL NOW.


PANEL 5

Same as panel 3, but Feather looks really annoyed that she’s showing her fangs.


EDWARD (nervous)

Y….YEAH, I…. I GUESS SO.


PAGE 11


PANEL 1

Buildings of the city are shown.


FEATHER (not shown, angry, and really loud)

AH’ CRAP!!!


PANEL 2

Somewhere else, Cindy leaves her building as she heads for the store.


CINDY (talking to herself and low tone)

LET’S SEE…. WE NEED BREAD, MILK, CEREAL, AND I SHOULD ALSO GET A HALF POUND OF BEEF FOR TOMORROW’S DINNER. OH’ YEAH, GOT TO GET SOME CHIPS AND ICE CREAM. YUMMY!


PANEL 3

Behind the walking Cindy is Alice whose head is peaking out of the front door.


ALICE (slightly shouting)

OH’ YEAH, CINDY? WE’RE GOING TO NEED SOME TOILET PAPER.


CINDY (acknowledges)

GOT IT.


PANEL 4

Cindy walks past Sam and Sandy who are going the other way.


PANEL 5

The right part of Sam is shown; while behind her is Sandy who looks at her and looks a little annoyed at her.


SAM (partly shown and serious)

I MEANT WHAT I SAID BACK THERE, ABOUT HOW EASY VICTORY WOULD BE IN THIS KIND OF WAR.


PAGE 12


PANEL 1

Another view of Sam and Sandy walking.


SAM (serious)

DO YOU REALLY THINK THAT BY SIMPLY PRAYING THAT GOD WILL WIN THIS WAR FOR YOU?


SANDY (a little annoyed)

ALL THAT HAPPENS IS BASED ON THE LORD’S PLAN AND THE DESTRUCTION OF EVIL IS ONE OF MANY PARTS OF HIS GRAND SCHEME.


SAM (serious)

THEN FREE WILL MUST BE A LIE.


PANEL 2

Sandy looks shocked after hearing that.


SAM (not shown)

YOU HEARD ME, IF GOD IS THE PUPPET MASTER THAT YOU IN A WAY BEEN SAYING HE IS THEN THERE’S NO CHANCE THAT FREE WILL AND CHOICE EXIST, NO HARSH REALITY BUT PLANNED EVENTS TO PUNISH US FOR WHAT SINS WE COMMENT.


SANDY (shocked)

THAT’S NOT WHAT IT MEANS….!


SAM (not shown)

IT MEANS ANYTHING BECAUSE PEOPLE LIKE FATHER JOHNSON ALWAYS CHANGES THE WORDS OF THE BIBLE’S MEANINGS WHILE EXPECTING GOD FEARING PEOPLE LIKE YOU TO BELIEVE THEM, TRUSTING THAT YOU WOULD NEVER REALIZE THAT SOME OF THE THINGS HE SAYS GOES AGAINST OTHER THINGS HE SAID BACK THEN.


SAM (not shown)

HE NEVER HAS A STRAIGHT STORY TO BEGIN WITH AND PROBABLY GIVES OUT THAT “GOD WORKS IN MYSTERIOUS WAYS” TO SAVE HIMSELF FROM EMBARRASSMENT.


PANEL 3

At the church part of the home base, Father Johnson is kneeling down to the big cross. He is doing the cross sign with his right hand as he prays while believing he’s doing God’s work.


SAM (not shown and word box)

I KNOW THAT A LOT OF PEOPLE HAVE BEEN TELLING YOU THE SAME THING, EVEN MISS CARSON AND YOUR TRAINER, AND OF COARSE YOU IGNORE THEM BECAUSE YOU ACTUALLY BELIEVE THAT YOU IN SOME WAY KILLED YOUR FAMILY, WHICH IS RIDICULOUS SINCE YOU WERE BEING ATTACKED AS WELL, BUT YOU ALLOW FATHER JOHNSON TO MAKE YOU THINK OTHERWISE SO HE CAN USE YOU.


PANEL 4

Father Johnson is now standing up.


SAM (not shown and word box)

THAT GUY SEES YOU, AND US, AS A QUICK AND EASY WAY TO SCORE SOME BROWNINE POINTS TO HEAVEN AND ANYONE WHO GETS IN THE WAY WILL PROBABLY PAY WITH THEIR LIVES WHICH HE’LL NO DOUBT SAY IS PART OF GOD’S PLAN.


PANEL 5

A closer look at Father Johnson.


SAM (not shown and word box)

HE DANGEROUS, VERY DANGEROUS AND BEING CLOSE TO HIM JUST PUTS YOUR LIFE AT RISK. I’M VERY SURE WHEN THE MOMENT COMES, THAT OPPORTUNITY THAT HE’S WAITING FOR, HE’LL START THE CLEANSING OF US AND ANYTHING ELSE HE SEES AS THE DEVIL’S WORK.


SAM (not shown and word box)

LIKE HEAVY METAL.


PAGE 13


PANEL 1

Cindy comes out of the store with her purchases that’s in a plastic bag.


PANEL 2

Cindy passes Ralph and James who are walking the other way.


RALPH (chilling and a little worried)

WOW, MAN, THIS IS SERIOUS HEAVY STUFF.


JAMES (serious)

I KNOW, WE USUALLY ARE THE ONES WITH THE PLAN AND GO TO THEM, BUT NOW IT SEEMS THAT THINGS ARE TURNING AROUND.


PANEL 3

The fronts of Ralph and James are shown, while Cindy’s back is shown in the background.


RALPH (chilling and a little worried)

IT’S LIKE WE WERE THE TOP BRASS OF THE GAME, THE PREDATORS, AND THEM THE PREYS, AND BEFORE WE KNOW IT, WE’RE GOING TO SOON BE THE HAS BEENS, THE PREYS.


JAMES (serious)

AS I SAID, MISTER ADAMS IS WORRIED ABOUT THIS NEWCOMER THAT HE STILL HASN’T YET IDENTIFY AND THIS MYSTERY GUY IS MAKING MOST OF THE NESTS THAT WE HAVEN’T YET TAKEN DOWN INTO POSSIBLY ONE ATTACK FORCE.


RALPH (chilling and a little worried)

WITH US BEING THE NUMBER ONE TARGET, RIGHT?


PANEL 4

Another view of James and Ralph.


JAMES (serious)

I WOULDN’T BE SURPRISED IF WE WERE THE FIRST THEY WOULD GO AFTER, SINCE THEY SHOULD BY NOW KNOW THAT WE EXIST BECAUSE WE’VE BEEN HUNTING THEM DOWN FOR SO LONG.


RALPH (chilling and a little worried)

YOU DON’T THINK THEY KNOW WHAT WE LOOK LIKE AS HUMANS, DO YA? THAT WOULD REALLY SUCK IF WE COULDN’T GO OUT AT NIGHTS ANYMORE SINCE THAT’S WHERE THE REAL PARTIES HAPPEN.


PANEL 5

A distant and above view of Edward and Feather who are still on top of the building. Edward is still on the floor scared and Feather is messing with her hair to show that she’s frustrated.


JAMES (not shown and word box)

WE MAY HAVE TO MAKE SACRIFICES IN THE NAME OF SECURITY AND OF COURSE AVOIDING GETTING OUR BLOOD DRAINED OUT OF US.


PAGE 14


PANEL 1

A much closer look at the frustrated Feather.


FEATHER (frustrated and angry)

DAMN! DAMN! DAMN! I JUST HAD TO PICK THE NEW GUY! THE ONE WHO WOULDN’T KNOW A DAMN THING THAT WILL HELP ME!


PANEL 2

A closer look at the eyes of the frustrated and angry Feather.


FEATHER (frustrated and angry)

I WON’T LET HIM GET AWAY! I WON’T LET IT GO FOR WHAT HE TOOK FROM ME THANKS TO THIS CURSE!


PANEL 3

A blurry image of a man and woman who look like lovers.


PANEL 4

The scared Edward is shown in the background looking at the frustrated and angry Feather who seems to have forgotten him. Her heads down enough that he eyes aren’t shown.


FEATHER (frustrated and angry)

MY SUFFERING WILL BE AVENGED WHEN I KILL THAT DAMNED ALCHEMIST WHO CREATED THIS VIRUS AND GAVE ME AN ETERNITY OF TORMENT!


PANEL 5

A blurry image of two hands, a man and woman, holding each other.


PANEL 6

The back/side of Feather’s head is shown. Feather reacts with her eyes when she hears something and seems to show interest while frustrated.


EDWARD (not shown)

ALCHEMIST?


PAGE 15


PANEL 1

The sitting Edward is shown at the left, while the standing Feather is standing at the right with her back facing Edward. Her head is a little down.


FEATHER (calming down)

YEAH, ALCHEMIST, SOMETHING THAT YOUR LEASH HOLDERS MAY HAVE TOLD YOU A LITTLE OF OR NOT AT ALL. DEPENDING ON HOW MUCH INFORMATION THEY FELT SAFE ENOUGH TO GIVE YOU WITHOUT WORRYING ABOUT YOU BECOMING TOO AGGRESSIVE TO CONTROL.


PANEL 2

A close look at the right side of Edward who seems less afraid and more sadden and confused.


FEATHER (not shown)

COULD YOU BE HONEST WITH ME WHEN ANSWERING THIS QUESTION I HAVE FOR YOU?


PANEL 3

A close look at the right side of Feather’s head and shoulders as she somewhat rises her head to look at the sky.


FEATHER (calm)

WHEN YOU LOOK AT ME, DO I LOOK LIKE SOMEONE WHO DESERVES SOMETHING LIKE THIS? I MEAN DO YOU SEE A MONSTER THAT DESERVED TO BE TURNED INTO A VAMPIRE AS IF I DID SOMETHING SO TERRIBLE WHEN I WAS HUMAN?


PANEL 4

Edward is shown again.


EDWARD (a little depressed)

WELL…. TO ME YOU’RE LIKE THE FIRST VAMPIRE I’VE EVER MET, EVEN THOUGH I KNOW THAT DEPARTMENT S.N. HAS TAKEN ME OUT TO HUNT DOWN YOU PEOPLE WHEN I WAS A WEREWOLF WHICH MEANS I HAVE NO MEMORY OF THOSE EVENTS, BUT WHEN I LOOK AT YOU, EVEN THOUGH I KNOW WHAT YOU ARE AND SAW YOU BE THAT CREATURE, I BEGIN TO WONDER IF YOU’RE HUMAN AND THAT EVERYTHING I JUST EXPERIENCED WAS AN ILLUSION. THAT YOU’RE JUST SOME SADDEN PERSON WHO WAS AT THE WRONG PLACE AT THE WRONG TIME.


FEATHER (not shown)

LIKE YOU?


EDWARD (a little depressed)

YEAH, I GUESS WE’RE BOTH VICTIMS OF FATE BASED ON ALCHEMY.


PANEL 5

A close look at Feather’s right side.


FEATHER (calm)

BUT YOU OBVIOUSLY GOT THE BETTER END OF THE STICK SINCE YOU’RE ONLY A MONSTER WHEN THE FULL MOON IS OUT WHICH IS THREE NIGHTS A MONTH WHILE THE REST OF THE TIME YOU’RE LIKE PART OF THE HUMAN RACE, ESPECIALLY IN THE DAYTIME.


EDWARD (not shown)

I WISH THAT WAS TRUE.


FEATHER (calm)

YEAH, THEY PROBABLY WOULD SEE YOU AS A BEAST OF BURDEN AT ALL TIMES OUT OF FEAR OF LOSING THEIR MOST VALUABLE POSSESSION WHEN IT COMES TO THE WAR.


FEATHER (calm)

I BET THEY EVEN HAVE A WAY TO TRACK YOU DOWN.


EDWARD (not shown)

IMPLANTED CHIP.


FEATHER (calm)

NASTY.


PANEL 6

Another look at Edward who’s head is down. Feather’s shadow is shown on the floor close to Edward.


FEATHER (not shown)

LISTEN, “EDWARD”, I KNOW WE’RE SUPPOSE TO BE ENEMIES BECAUSE THEY SAY WE ARE, AND NO I DON’T PLAN TO KILL YOU, BUT I NEED YOU TO JUST FOR A FEW MINUTES NOT THINK WHAT IS HAPPENING NOW AND TELL ME ANYTHING THAT YOU MIGHT KNOW EVEN IF IT ISN’T MUCH TO GO ON.


PANEL 7

A close look at Feather’s eyes as she turns them to look back. Some of her hair is shown at front.


FEATHER (eyes only shown)

YOU DON’T EVEN HAVE TO TELL ME EVERYTHING…. JUST SOME THINGS THAT MIGHT HELP ME ESTABLISH ON WHETHER OR NOT THE PERSON I’M LOOKING FOR IS IN THAT BUILDING YOU’RE STAYING IN.


PAGE 16


PANEL 1

Somewhere else in the city, a lone terrified woman is running for her life! Crazy laughter is heard!


VAMPIRE #1 (not shown and shouting)

YUM-YUMS?!


VAMPIRE #2 (not shown and shouting)

OH’ YUM-YUMS?!


PANEL 2

An above look of the running woman’s back! The crazy laughter is still heard!


PANEL 3

One of the vampires leaps down with animal-like grace and is crouching down on the ground! He looks like a gang member!


PANEL 4

A closer look at vampire #1’s head as he smiles and has his tongue out to show how excited and thirsty he is!


PANEL 5

With animal-like athletic ability, vampire #1 gives chase while vampire #2 comes down to follow!


VAMPIRE #2 (shouting)

HEY! WAIT UP!


PANEL 6

An above view of  Julie, Sam’s trainer, and Bob, Sandy’s trainer, who are in there silver knight gear and under the influence of the alchemical drug that makes them physically perfect, are leaping from building roof to building roof.


PAGE 17


PANEL 1

The two vampires are hoping around the terrified running woman with animal-like speed and agility to have some sick fun with her! The two vampires continue their crazy laughter!


VAMPIRE #1 (crazy and excited)

COME ON, BABY, WE JUST WANT TO PARTY WITH YA!


VAMPIRE #2 (crazy and excited)

YEAH! YEAH!! YEAH!!!


PANEL 2

The crazy and excited vampire #1 puts his face next to the surprised and terrified woman! The terrified woman screams really loud!


VAMPIRE #1 (crazy, excited, and loud)

BOO!!!


PANEL 3

The terrified woman runs the other way! More crazy laughter!


VAMPIRE #1 (not shown)

AND NOW WE RUN THE OTHER WAY!


VAMPIRE #2 (not shown)

YEAH! RUN, LITTLE LADY!


PANEL 4

Vampire #1 eagerly runs towards the direction of the woman with animal-like athletic ability, as well as eagerness to feed! Vampire #2 is behind him, but hasn’t yet started to move!


VAMPIRE #1 (impatient, savage, and really hungry)

TO HELL WITH FOOLING AROUND WITH OUR MEAL! LET’S EAT!!!


PANEL 5

A part of the right side of the terrified woman and vampire #1 are shown! Vampire #1 savagely takes a bite of the woman’s neck from behind! The woman is deeply shock by the pain of the bite that she can’t bring out a scream!


PAGE 18


PANEL 1

The back of the surprised vampire #1 is shown, who’s still with the woman, but stops biting her when he hears vampire #2’s scream of pain!


PANEL 2

The silver knight Bob has his staff, with silver blade, thru the now dead vampire #2’s chest and is left him above the ground to show his physical strength.


PANEL 3

The angry and threaten vampire #1 pushes away it’s injured prey as it gives out a hiss in the direction where his enemies are at!


PANEL 4

As if looking thru vampire #1’s eyes, the creature heads towards silver knight Bob, who’s still holding up vampire #2 with staff, at animal-like speed!


PANEL 5

Same as panel 4, but like a lady of action, silver knight Julie gets in front and prepares to battle the vampire with her staff!


JULIE (action girl)

HI.


PAGE 19


PANEL 1

Silver knight Julie and vampire #1 start to battle, but the vampire seems to have the disadvantage! The vampire fights like an animal while silver knight Julie fights with martial art skill.


PANEL 2

With the silver blade of her staff, silver knight Julie cuts off vampire #1’s right arm! Vampire #1 screams in pain!


PANEL 3

A close look at the injured and enraged vampire #1!


VAMPIRE #1 (enraged and really loud)

I’LL TEAR YOU APART!!!


PANEL 4

With skillful grace, silver knight Julie cuts off vampire #1’s head!


JULIE (action girl and unimpressed)

YEAH, GOOD LUCK ON DOING THAT WITHOUT A HEAD, THOUGH YOU DON’T SEEM TO BE THE KIND THAT USES IT MUCH SO YOU GOT THAT GOING FOR YA!


PANEL 5

Silver knight Julie looks down at her victory, but doesn’t seem happy about it for some reason. Silver knight Bob is in the background and has let go of the dead vampire #2 and doesn’t look happy as well.


VICTIM WOMAN (not shown and relieved)

TH….THANK YOU.


PAGE 20


PANEL 1

The relieved victim woman is shown smiling while still sitting on the ground after being pushed down by vampire #1.


VICTIM WOMAN (relieved and a little shocked)

I…. I THOUGHT THOSE “THINGS” WERE GOING TO KILL ME AND PROBABLY WOULD IF YOU GUYS DIDN’T GET HERE WHEN YOU DID.


PANEL 2

Silver knight Julie looks away and even though her helmet covers her face, her posure tells you that she’s saddens for what she has to do next.


VICTIM WOMAN (not shown)

I DON’T KNOW HOW I EVER GOING TO REPAY YOU FOR SAVING MY LIFE.


PANEL 3

The bite wound on victim woman’s neck is the main focus.


VICTIM WOMAN (part of neck only shown and relieved)

I’M JUST SO HAPPY TO BE ALIVE.


PANEL 4

Silver knight Julie’s hand is shown taking a revolver from it’s holder from her side.


JULIE (hand and side only shown and a little depressed)

I’M SORRY.


VICTIM WOMAN (not shown and scared)

SORRY?.... (a little louder) OH’ MY GOD! PLEASE! DON’T!


PANEL 5

Silver knight Julie puts a bullet into victim woman’s head.


PANEL 6

Silver knight Julie is the main focus and she still has the revolver aimed at the now dead victim woman’s direction. The end of the revolver is smoking.


JULIE (a little depressed)

BUT IT’S BETTER THIS WAY THEN TO LET YOU CHANGE INTO WHAT THEY ARE.


PANEL 7

A part of silver knight Julie’s hand and revolver are shown, while silver knight Bob is shown in the background.


JULIE (hand only shown and a little depressed)

YOU KNOW, BOB, THIS JOB CAN SOMETIMES SUCK BEYOND BELIEF.


BOB (a little depressed)

YEAH.


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PANEL 1

Somewhere else in the city, a lot of people are shown walking around and standing there looks like Edward, but it’s too far to be sure.


EDWARD (thought balloon and a little depressed)

WELL…. I DID IT.


PANEL 2

A closer look reveals that it is Edward.


EDWARD (thought balloon and a little depressed)

I TOLD THAT VAMPIRE LADY SOME OF THE THINGS THAT SHE WANTED TO KNOW AND HERE I AM ALIVE AND WELL.


PANEL 3

The left side of the upper part of Cindy is shown as she heads home with her stuff. Other people walking are shown.


EDWARD (not shown and word box)

AND ALTHOUGH IT WASN’T MUCH, I CAN’T HELP WONDERING IF THAT MAKES ME A TRAITOR, A COWARD.


PANEL 4

Edward’s feet are shown starting to move. Other moving feet are there.


EDWARD (feet only shown and thought balloon)

IT’S NOT LIKE I’M A PLAYER IN THIS WAR, MORE LIKE A TOOL THAT THEY HAVEN’T BEEN HONEST WITH, AND AFTER MEETING THAT LADY, I CAN’T HELP WONDERING IF MAYBE ALL WE’RE DOING IS CLEANING SOMEONE’S MESS INSTEAD OF FIGHTING A GREAT EVIL.


EDWARD (feet only shown and thought balloon)

I ALSO CAN’T HELP WONDERING IF THEY’LL PUT A SILVER BULLET THRU MY HEAD IF THEY FOUND….


PANEL 5

The right/front of Edward’s eyes and glasses are shown and are filled with shock for what he sees!


EDWARD (thought balloon and surprised)

OUT?


PANEL 6

The left/front of Cindy’s eyes are shown and are filled with shock for what she sees!


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PANEL 1

Edward is on the left side of the panel, while Cindy is on the right. They see each other and are not sure whether to believe this is real or not. Cindy is holding her plastic bag of groceries with her left hand. There are people walking by.


PANEL 2

Same as panel 1, but people are still walking by.


PANEL 3

Same as panel 2, but people are still walking by.


PANEL 4

Same as panel 3, but people are still walking by and Cindy’s plastic bag of groceries drops to the ground without her noticing.


TO BE CONTINUED