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Lycanthropy Cursed

“New York Wilderness”

(1 of 6)

By

Brian Uhe


PAGE 1


PANEL 1

At a distance, New York City is shown. It’s starting to get dark.


PANEL 2

An above, and closer, look at a street of the city filled with cars and people.


PANEL 3

As if the reader was among them, the pedestrians and cars are moving along in a way as if trained to do this in a daily routine.


PANEL 4

There’s a group of 5 people that others are trying to keep a distance from because of fear which are gang members. Gang member #1 is wearing a red handkerchief on his head.


GANG MEMBER #1 (tough, sassy, and immature)

DID YOU SEE THAT HOT BABE?! SHE WAS PRACTICALLY BEGGING ME TO COME OVER THERE TO HER!


GANG MEMBER #2 (tough, amused, and in disbelief)

YEAH, RIGHT, YA LOSER! SHE WAS OBVIOUSLY TOO BUSY KISSING HER MAN TO NOTICE YOU!


PANEL 5

The backs of the 5 gang members are shown. Member #1 lightly pushes member #2 for that remark. The other members laugh.


GANG MEMBER #1 (tough and annoyed)

SHUT UP!


GANG MEMBER #2 (tough and amused)

WELL, IT’S TRUE, MAN! FOR SOME REASON YOU SEEM UNABLE TO NOTICE THINGS LIKE THAT AS IF YOU’RE INCAPABLE OF FINDING YOURSELF A WOMAN THAT ISN’T ALREADY TAKEN!


PAGE 2




PANEL 1

Gang member #1 is the main focus. The others, who are partly shown, are still having fun with him which annoys him.


GANG MEMBER #1 (tough and annoyed)

IF YOU @$$%&#@S WEREN’T MY “COMRADES”, I WOULD PROBABLY SHOOT YOU WHERE YOU STAND FOR THAT REMARK!


PANEL 2

Gang member #1 and the others are shock to what they see! Crashing and wrecking sounds are heard!


GANG MEMBER #1 (shocked and in disbelief)

WHAT THE $#%@?!


PANEL 3

The gang members are partly shown as they look at the entrance way of an abandoned building where they hang out and notice that their “stuff” have been thrown out and wrecked! Another of their stuff has been thrown out thru the broken glass window! Wrecking sounds are still heard!


PANEL 4

The gang members run into the building! Wrecking sounds are still being made!


PAGE 3


PANEL 1

The gang members see the one responsible for the damages who’s in the background! The guy is about to wreck a chair that he’s lifting! The guy turns his head when he notices that the gang members are here!


GANG MEMBER #1 (tough, enraged, and loud)

HEY, @$$#%&@! WHAT THE #$%@ DO YOU THINK YOU’RE DOING MESSING WITH OUR HANGOUT?!!


PANEL 2

A closer and clearer look at the guy who trashed the place, who now simply throws the chair that he was planning to wreck aside, since there’s no need now that the people he was waiting for are here. He looks like a geeky guy who thinks he cool which is why he wear a leather jacket and shades.


JEREMY (confident, cool, and crazy)

OH, HELLO THERE.




JEREMY (confident, cool, and crazy)

I THOUGHT IT WOULD HAVE BEEN A GOOD IDEA TO “REDECORATE” THE PLACE BEFORE YOU GOT HERE SO TO GET YOU GUYS IN THE RIGHT MOOD BEFORE GETTING INTO THE REAL FUN.


GANG MEMBER #3 (not shown, enraged and loud)

YOU ARE SO #$%@EN DEAD!!


GANG MEMBER #1 (not shown, enraged and loud)

#$%@EN RIGHT HE’S DEAD!!


PANEL 3

A close look at Jeremy’s face that has a smirk on it.


JEREMY (confident, cool, crazy, and amused)

YEAH, IT’S LIKE I SAID…. “TO GET YOU IN THE RIGHT MOOD”.


PANEL 4

Somewhere else in New York, a corporate building is shown with the name “Applimax”, a company that manufactures and sells home appliances, but has a secret in the “basement” of the building.


DOCTOR WILLIAMS (not shown, word box, and in a hurry)

HURRY UP, PEOPLE! WE DON’T HAVE MUCH TIME TO WASTE BY ACTING LIKE WE HAVE ALL THE TIME IN THE WORLD!


ONE OF THE WORKERS (not shown and word box)

WE’RE GOING AS FAST AS WE CAN, SIR!


DOCTOR WILLIAMS (not shown and word box)

DON’T TALK BACK TO ME, PAL, IT JUST MAKES ME WANT TO LIKE YOU EVEN LESS AND I HAPPEN TO BE A GUY WITH THE AUTHORITY TO MAKE WORKING HERE A REAL PAIN FOR SOMEONE LIKE YOU.


PAGE 4


PANEL 1

Doctor Williams and the workers put a highly advanced container, which has Edward’s body inside it, into a room that has a durable glass which Mister Adams and Miss Carson are looking thru. The room has a table for the container.


DOCTOR WILLIAMS (bossy, annoying, and in a hurry)

COME ON, PEOPLE! IF THIS THING DOES WORK, THEN THE LAST THING WE WANT TO BE IS IN THIS ROOM!



PANEL 2

The right side of Mister Adams and Miss Carson are shown as they focus thru the protective glass.


MISTER ADAMS (charming, focused, and in charged)

AND SO THE GRANDEST OF ALL SHOWS BEGINS, DEPENDING IF THIS WORKS OR NOT.


MISS CARSON (focused)

THE ODDS ARE AGAINST HIM, SIR, IN MANY ASPECTS WHICH SAY THAT HE MAY NOT SUCCEED.


MISS CARSON (focused)

THERE’S ALSO THE FACT THAT NO ONE KNOWS HOW THE LAST PERSON WHO SUCCEEDED IN THIS WAS ABLE TO DO IT WHICH WAS ALMOST 100 YEARS AGO.


MISTER ADAMS (charming, focused, and in charge)

WHICH MEANS, MISS CARSON, THAT DOCTOR WILLIAMS IS ALMOST WORKING BLINDFOLDED AND HAS REALLY NOTHING TO WORK WITH BUT GUESSES, EVEN THOUGH THEY’RE EDUCATED ONES.


PANEL 3

Tubes are being connected into the slots of the container that’s now on the table.


DOCTOR WILLIAMS (not shown)

ONCE YOU GOT THE TUBES ATTACHED TO THE CONTAINER, I’LL START THE FEED OF CHEMICALS!


DOCTOR WILLIAMS (not shown)

MAKE SURE YOU GOT THEM REAL SECURED, PEOPLE, BECAUSE WE’RE NOT GOING TO HAVE A SECOND CHANCE WITH THIS, NOR WILL YOU HAVE A SECOND CHANCE IF YOU SCREW THIS UP FOR ME!


DOCTOR WILLIAMS (not shown)

I MEAN IT! DON’T PISS ME OFF!


PANEL 4

Doctor Williams and the others quickly leave the room after preparations are made.


DOCTOR WILLIAMS (bossy, annoying, and in a hurry)

THE FULL MOON SHOULD BEING COMING OUT IN A FEW MINUTES, SO LET’S GET OUT OF HERE BEFORE THAT HAPPENS!


PANEL 5

The full moon is about to come out of the clouds.

DOCTOR WILLIAMS (not shown and word box)

MAN, THIS BETTER WORK AFTER ALL THE EFFORT I PUT INTO THIS PROJECT OR I’M GOING TO HAVE A NERVOUS BREAKDOWN!


PAGE 5


PANEL 1

The five angry gang members have their guns out and are pointing them in the direction that Jeremy is! They’re shown on the right side of the panel.


GANG MEMBER #1 (tough and angry)

SAY HELLO TO GOD FOR US WHEN YOU LEAVE, OR THE DEVIL, DEPENDING ON WHICH PLACE YOU’LL END UP AFTER WE PUT HOLES IN YOUR SCRAWNY BODY!


PANEL 2

Jeremy is shown on the left side of the panel and is smiling. He’s also laughing.


JEREMY (confident, cool, and crazy)

WAIT! YOU’RE GOING TO MISS SOMETHING THAT YOU’RE REALLY GOING TO FIND “REALLY” COOL!


PANEL 3

A close look at the excited Doctor Williams who has his fingers crossed!


DOCTOR WILLIAMS (low tone, excited, and worried)

PLEASE WORK! PLEASE! PLEASE! PLEASE!


PANEL 4

Same as panel 1, but the angry, but now confused, gang members somewhat lighten their grips on their guns, but keep them up.


GANG MEMBER #1 (tough, angry, and confused)

WHAT THE #$%@ ARE YOU TALKING ABOUT, YA CRAZY @#$%&#?!


GANG MEMBER #1 (tough, angry, and confused)

ME AND MY BUDS ARE ABOUT TO SHOOT YOU DEAD AND HERE YOU ARE ACTING LIKE YOU’RE BULLET PROOF OR SOMETHING!


GANG MEMBER #2 (tough, angry, and confused)

THIS GUY’S MORE LIKE BRAIN DAMAGED THEN CRAZY, MAN! WE’RE PROBABLY DOING HIM A FAVOR BY MAKING THIS HIS LAST DAY OF BREATHING!


PANEL 5

A close view of the grinning Jeremy.

JEREMY (confident, cool, crazy, and somewhat singing)

WAIT FOR IT!


PANEL 6

From the other side of the glass, Doctor Williams, Mister Adams, and Miss Carson are shown. The worried and excited Doctor Williams has his hands on the glass. Mister Adams and Miss Carson look at the doctor, because they notice how antsy he is. Mister Adams has one of his eye brows up.


DOCTOR WILLIAMS (worried and excited)

IT’S ALMOST TIME!


PANEL 7

The full moon is coming out of the clouds.


PAGE 6


PANEL 1

The 5 gang members with guns look spook! Growling sounds are heard!


PANEL 2

Jeremy is starting to turn into a werewolf! He now has fangs and his shades are down enough to show his animal eyes!


JEREMY (crazy, direct, and animal voice)

HERE IT IS!!!


PANEL 3

The 5 gang members panic and start firing their guns in Jeremy’s direction!


PANEL 4

The transforming Jeremy laughs in an animal-like voice while getting hit by bullets that he too crazy to feel! His body reacts to the hits from the bullets!


PANEL 5

Back to where the room where Edward’s body is, Doctor Williams, Mister Adams, and Miss Carson notices that nothing has happen within the container. Doctor Williams has his hands on the glass and looks very disappointed!


DOCTOR WILLIAMS (depressed, in disbelief, and disappointed)

NOTHING’S HAPPENING.


PANEL 6

Same as panel 5, but a reaction from within the container makes it move in a dramatic way! Doctor Williams, Mister Adams, and Miss Carson are surprised by this!


DOCTOR WILLIAMS (shocked)

OH’ MY GOD….!


PAGE 7


PANEL 1

Edward, the full werewolf, bursts out of the container with animal-like power and savagery! A loud and savage growl is made!


DOCTOR WILLIAMS (not shown, excited, and loud)

YES!


PAGE 8


PANEL 1

One of the gang members is lying on the floor dead after getting attacked by a wild animal! A shadow of a full werewolf is shown on the wall! Screams of terror from the other members are heard, as well as a savage roar! Gun fire is also heard, as well as stuff getting wrecked!


GANG MEMBER #4(not shown, loud, and terrified)

OH’ GOD! WHAT THE #$%@ IS HE?!!


GANG MEMBER #3 (not shown, loud, and terrified)

THIS $#%# AIN’T HAPPENING!!!


PANEL 2

Gang member #5 is thrown away and is dead! The same noises from panel 1 are still being made!


PANEL 3

The panicking gang member #2 is firing his gun at the werewolf’s direction!


PANEL 4

(COLOR BLIND SCENE) As if looking thru the eyes of the werewolf, the creature heads towards the terrified, helpless, and screaming gang member #2 at animal-like speed!


GANG MEMBER #2 (loud and terrified)

NOOOOOOOOOO!!!


PANEL 5

A shadow of the werewolf attacking gang member #2 is shown on a wall, as well as a splatter of blood from the guy! Screams of terror and pain are heard!


PAGE 9


PANEL 1

Gang member #1 panics and decides to save himself by leaving his buds to their fate! Screams of terror and things getting wrecked are made!


GANG MEMBER #1 (panicking)

I GOT TO GET OUT OF HERE BEFORE THAT MONSTER GETS TO ME!


PANEL 2

Gang member #1 is running towards the door and is almost there! The noises from panel 1 are still being made!


GANG MEMBER #1 (thought balloon and panicking)

ALMOST THERE!


PANEL 3

Gang member #1 is halfway outside of the building!


PANEL 4

Gang member #1 falls before completing exiting the building, because someone grabbed his legs!


PANEL 5

The psychotic werewolf’s hand and arm is shown taking hold of the terrified gang member #1 who tries to pull himself away from the stronger creature who’s eyes, grinding teeth, and some of his features, are shown from within the shadows of the entrance way! The partly shown full werewolf growls!


GANG MEMBER #1 (loud and terrified)

OH’ GOD!!! SOMEONE HELP ME!!!


PANEL 6

The full moon above and some buildings below are shown.


GANG MEMBER #1 (not shown, loud, and terrified)

HELP MEAAAAAAAAAAAAGH! ACK!


PAGE 10


PANEL 1

Back at the experiment room, the right side of Doctor Williams, Mister Adams, and Miss Carson is shown. The doctor looks excited and still has his hands on the glass, while the other two look calm, as they look into the room where the subject is in that is partly shown, while the “subject” isn’t.


DOCTOR WILLIAMS (excited and happy)

IT WORKED! IT WORKED! I’M AN ABSOLUTE GENIUS I TELL YOU!

PANEL 2

Same as panel 1, but the savage and growling Edward werewolf tries to attack the three people, but ends up slamming it’s head on the unbreakable glass in a dramatic way! The three people don’t react to this, because they knew that the glass was too unbreakable for the werewolf to go thru!


PANEL 3

Same as panel 2, but the partly shown werewolf falls to the unseen floor!


PANEL 4

Same as panel 3, but the werewolf isn’t shown, because it’s now on the floor that isn’t shown in the panel.


MISTER ADAMS (charming, calm, and in charge)

WELL…. THAT HAD TO HURT LIKE NOBODY’S BUSINESS.


PANEL 5

The backs of the three are shown and Mister Adams is looking at Doctor Williams who looking at him back.


MISTER ADAMS (charming and in charge)

CONGRATULATIONS, DOCTOR WILLIAMS, YOU HAVE ACHIEVED SOMETHING THAT HASN’T BEEN DONE FOR NEARLY 100 YEARS AND THE SPECIMEN LOOKS HEALTHY AFTER COMING BACK FROM THE DEAD.


DOCTOR WILLIAMS (happy)

THANK YOU VERY MUCH, MISTER ADAMS, WE’RE ALL VERY PROUD ON THE SUCCESS OF THIS PROJECT THAT TOOK A LOT OF ALL-NIGHTERS AND COUNTLESS RECHECKING ON CALCULATIONS TO REACH THIS GOAL, EVEN THOUGH MY KNOW-IT-ALL ASSISTANTS WERE GETTING CLOSE TO BECOMING TEST SUBJECTS THEMSELVES.


PANEL 6

Mister Adams’ chest is only shown, while Doctor Williams’ looks like he looking up to him and looks a little embarrassed on what Mister Adams asks him.


MISTER ADAMS (chest only shown, charming, and in charge)

SO, I GUESS WE CAN EXPECT A REPEAT OF THIS SUCCESSFUL PROCESS WHEN THE NEED EVER COMES, CORRECT?


MISTER ADAMS (charming and in charge)

YOU CAN DO IT AGAIN, RIGHT?




DOCTOR WILLIAMS (worried and a little embarrassed)

WELL, THERE ARE SOME THINGS ABOUT THIS DISCOVERY THAT WE STILL DON’T UNDERSTAND AND SUCCESS WAS PARTLY DUE TO THE CIRCUMSTANCES INVOLVING THE SUBJECT.


MISTER ADAMS (chest only shown, charming, and in charge)

WHICH MEANS THAT THE ODDS ARE AGAINST YOU WHEN IT COMES TO DOING THIS AGAIN AND BEING SUCCESSFUL?


DOCTOR WILLIAMS (worried and a little embarrassed)

UM…. YEAH, THAT’S ONE WAY OF SAYING IT.


PAGE 11


PANEL 1

Mister Adams starts to leave the room with Miss Carson behind him. Doctor Williams’ back is shown and looks depressed. He has his hand on the glass to support him.


MISTER ADAMS (charming and in charge)

AH, WELL, AT LEAST YOU HAD YOUR 15 MINUTES OF FAME, BUT I WOULD APPRECIATE IT IF YOU WOULD USE SOME OF YOUR WORKING TIME ON THE OTHER PROJECTS THAT WON’T GET DONE BY LETTING THEM COLLECT DUST, BUT AGAIN CONGRATULATIONS, AND THANK YOU FOR ADDING ONE MORE MEMBER TO OUR LITTLE FAMILY.


MISTER ADAMS (charming and in charge)

MISS CARSON WILL STOP BY HERE WHEN MORNING COMES TO HELP THE BOY ADJUST TO HIS NEW LIFE HERE, AND OF COARSE ARRANGE LIVING QUARTERS FOR HIM, AS WELL AS A CELL DURING THOSE FULL MOON NIGHTS WHEN HE ISN’T BEING USED.


PANEL 2

Same as panel 1, but Mister Adams and Miss Carson are gone. Savage Edward werewolf from behind the glass is getting up.


DOCTOR WILLIAMS (depressed and annoyed)

I KNEW IT. I KNEW HE WOULD DO THIS TO ME AFTER I’M FEELING HAPPY FROM A MOMENT OF SUCCESS.


DOCTOR WILLIAMS (depressed and annoyed)

HE JUST WALKS UP TO MY VICTORY CAKE, PULLS DOWN HIS PANTS, AND TAKES A POOP ON IT, BECAUSE IT’S SO LIKE HIM.


PANEL 3

Same as panel 2, but the Doctor is looking at the savage Edward werewolf who’s looking back at him and is growling.

DOCTOR WILLIAMS (depressed and annoyed)

WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU LOOKING AT?


PANEL 4

The savage Edward werewolf tries to break thru the glass again, but not as dramatic as the first one, while Doctor Williams ignores him to drown in his pity.


PANEL 5

Mister Adams and Miss Carson are in an advanced-looking wide hallway where there other people there who are busy. Miss Carson, who’s behind Mister Adams, stops when a worker hands her a piece of paper. Mister Carson turns his head a bit to see this while still walking. He looks displeased as if he already knows what’s on the paper.


PANEL 6

Miss Carson catches up with the now standing and waiting Mister Adams who is prepared to hear the expected bad news. Mister Adams’ back is facing Miss Carson.


MISTER ADAMS (charming, annoyed, and in charge)

IT’S HIM, ISN’T IT? IT’S THAT SICK BASTARD WHO NO DOUBT SLAUGHTERED SOME MORE TO SATISFY HIS PERVERTED DESIRES OF BECOMING A WILD BEAST THAT HAS A TASTE FOR BLOOD, AM I RIGHT?


MISS CARSON (a little depressed)

YES, SIR. THIS TIME IT SEEMED TO HAVE BEEN A STREET GANG WHO WERE FOUND RIPPED APART IN WHAT THE AUTHORITIES BELIEVE IS THEIR HANGOUT JUDGING FROM WHAT THEY COULD SEE FROM UNDERNEATH ALL THE BLOOD AND BODY PARTS.


MISS CARSON (a little depressed)

ONE OF OUR AGENTS THERE SAYS THAT THEY SUSPECT THAT A WILD ANIMAL DID IT, BUT A NORMAL ONE INSTEAD OF A WEREWOLF, WHICH IS WHY THEY’RE CHECKING PLACES LIKE THE ZOO TO SEE IF ANY OF THE ANIMALS THERE HAD ESCAPED.


MISTER ADAMS (charming, annoyed, sarcasm, and in charge)

WELL HOORAY FOR THE SILVER LINING IN THE CLOUDS FOR THAT!


PAGE 12


PANEL 1

Mister Adams and Miss Carson are now walking again. Other people there walking are also shown and some of them are carrying files. Mister Adams has his fist close to his face.


MISTER ADAMS (charming, angry, direct, and in charge)

THIS IS RIDICULES!


MISTER ADAMS (charming, angry, and in charge)

I KNOW IT’S HARD AND RARE TO FIND A WEREWOLF IN THIS COUNTRY AND OUTSIDE, SINCE MOST VICTIMS END UP BEING RIPPED APART INSTEAD OF LEAVING WITH JUST A BITE THAT INFECTS THEM, BUT WE’RE TALKING ABOUT ONE THAT HAPPENS TO BE HERE IN NEW YORK CITY AND FOR SOME STUPID REASON WE CAN’T SEEM TO FIND HIM!


MISTER ADAMS (charming, angry, and in charge)

HE’S ALWAYS ONE STEP AHEAD OF US WHICH MAKES ME WONDER IF HE’S EITHER A GENIUS OR THE MOST GOD DAMNED DUMB-LUCKIEST LOSER ON THE PLANET!


PANEL 2

Another view of the walking Mister Adams and Miss Carson. Of coarse there are other people walking in the background. The angry Mister Adams now has his hands in his pockets.


MISTER ADAMS (charming, angry, and in charge)

THIS HAS TO STOP! THIS BEING A FEW STEPS BEHIND DOES NOTHING BUT ADD TO THE COUNT OF DEAD AND SLAUGHTERED BODIES WHICH SOME OF THEM WERE NO DOUBT INNOCENT PEOPLE WHO HAVE DOME NOTHING TO DESERVE THIS SINCE HE SEES EVERYONE AS PREY NO MATTER WHO OR WHAT THEY ARE!


MISS CARSON (serious)

ALL OUR UNDERCOVER AGENTS ARE PULLING ALL THE STRINGS TO AT LEAST COME UP WITH A “THEORY” TO WHERE THE KILLER WILL STRIKE NEXT, BUT….


MISTER ADAMS (charming, angry, and in charge)

BUT WITHOUT A FULL MOON, THE WEREWOLF IS LIKE A NORMAL HUMAN IN MANY WAYS AND CAN EASILY BLEND IN WITH THE POPULATION AND HIDE SINCE EVERYONE’S LOOKING FOR AN UNUSUAL WILD BEAST, AND WE DON’T EVEN KNOW WHAT HE LOOKS LIKE AS A HUMAN.


MISTER ADAMS (charming, angry, and in charge)

I’M WELL AWARE ON HOW DIFFICULT IT CAN BE TO TRACK DOWN SOMEONE WHO IS A WEREWOLF DURING THE DAYTIME, AS WELL AS NIGHTS WITHOUT A FULL MOON, ESPECIALLY WHEN THERE’S VERY LITTLE TO GO ON.


PANEL 3

A close look at Mister Adams’ face.


MISTER ADAMS (charming, angry, and in charge)

WE HAVE TO FIND THIS PERSON, AND PERHAPS KILL HIM, BECAUSE IF THERE’S ANYTHING THAT’S WORSE THEN A WILD WEREWOLF….


PANEL 4

Mister Adams and Miss Carson’s back and left side are shown as they head towards a grand doorway. Above the doors is a well designed sign saying ”DEPARTMENT SN”. Of coarse there are people there walking around.


MISTER ADAMS (charming, angry, and in charge)

IT’S A WEREWOLF WHO’S PSYCHOTIC!


PAGE 13


PANEL 1

It’s now morning at the park and some people are there. Some are joggers, while some are people taking a walk. A couple there is talking.


MAN (unsure)

I DON’T KNOW, HON, HAVING YOUR MOTHER MAKE PLANS FOR OUR WEDDING SEEMS TO BE SOMETHING WE MAY END UP REGRETTING.


WOMAN (a little annoyed and a little confused)

AND WHAT’S WRONG WITH MY MOTHER HELPING OUT?


PANEL 2

Another view of the couple and a closer one.


MAN (unsure and trying to be nice)

WELL, THERE THE FACT THAT SHE DOESN’T SEEM TO REALLY LIKE ME AND THAT MIGHT END UP MAKING HER SABOTAGE THE CEREMONY.


WOMAN (annoyed)

YOU’RE BEING RIDICULOUS! TELL ME ONE THING THAT SHE DID THAT SAYS THAT SHE WANTS YOU TO GO AWAY?


MAN (trying to be nice)

REMEMBER THAT GUY MIKE FROM THAT BARBECUE THAT YOUR DAD HAD LAST WEEK? SHE TRIED TO INTRODUCE HIM TO YOU IN A WAY WHERE I WAS BEING PUSHED ASIDE AS IF SHE WAS HOPING YOU WOULD FORGET I EXISTED.


PANEL 3

Same as panel 2, but the couple are somewhat shocked to see Jeremy walking past them with a grin who is now wearing some of the gang members’, the ones he killed as a werewolf, clothes to replace the ones he ripped apart when he transformed, including gang member #1’s red hankerchief. What’s odd about the clothes is that they have some claw marks and spots of dried blood that could be paint to someone’s point of view.


MAN (trying to be nice and shocked)

I’M TELLING YOU, THAT WOMAN’S AF….!


PANEL 4

The focus in now on the walking and smiling Jeremy.


JEREMY (confident, cool, and crazy)

WOW, WHAT A GREAT DAY TO BE ALIVE!


JEREMY (confident, cool, and crazy)

MAKES ME WANT TO SING A SONG FOR EVERYONE TO HEAR SO THEY CAN SEE WHAT A HAPPY BOY I AM FOR BEING IN THIS GREAT CITY!


PANEL 5

People there are trying to avoid the singing Jeremy. There’s a mother who picks up her 2 year old son as she quickly walks away.


JEREMY (heavy metal singing, confident, cool, and crazy)

KILL THEM ALL! KILL THEM ALL! LET THE BODY COUNT BE BIG ENOUGH TO FILL A MALL! A RIVER OF BLOOD WHO’S WAVES WILL LET OTHER’S HEAR IT’S CALL!


PAGE 14


PANEL 1

A huge room that’s part of Department S.N.’s base is shown. There are some vehicles parked there, as well as crates that show that this is where they keep the “big toys”. A woman in a special uniform (Julie) that says she a soldier ready for action is walking and has in her hand a snapped, but highly advance-looking, leash. She looks upset about it.


SAM (not shown and word box)

I HEARD DEPARTMENT S.N. HAS A NEW PET TO ADD TO THE TEAM.


JAMES (not shown and word box)

YOU MEAN MEMBER.


SAM (not shown and word box)

LAST TIME I CHECKED, A MEMBER IS SOMEONE WHO JOINED SOMETHING AND WAS TREATED LIKE A PERSON.


SAM (not shown and word box)

ANYONE HERE ACTUALLY VOLUNTEERED FOR THIS BIT?


PANEL 2

The people talking are shown. Sam, an 18 year old tomboy girl, is sitting on one of the crates and chilling, James, a 28 year old black man, is leaning on a wall with his arms around him. With them is a 23 year old Mexican guy named Ralph, who is smoking, and a 12 year old girl who dresses like someone who was brought up in a very strict religious way named Sandy.


RALPH (slightly in a bad mood)

I SURE DIDN’T AND THEY’RE NOT PAYING ME ENOUGH TO WANT TO.


SAM (moody)

THEY’RE NOT PAYING YOU AT ALL. THEY JUST SIMPLY GIVING US AN ALLOWANCE IN PENNIES.


SANDY (religiously naïve)

BUT WE MUST DO THIS TO REDEEM OUR SOULS FOR THE SINS WE COMMITTED WHICH IS WHY WE ARE CURSED BY THE BEAST.


PANEL 3

The now annoyed Sam looks at Sandy. The other two just watch.


SAM (annoyed)

OH’ SPARE US WITH THE HOLIER THEN THOU B.S., YA FASCIST!


SANDY (religiously naïve and nervous)

BUT FATHER JOHNSON SAID THAT THIS WAS GOD’S WAY OF PUNISHING US FOR OUT OF LACK OF FAITH AND LOYALTY TO THE LORD AND THE HOLY BIBLE!


SAM (annoyed)

FATHER JOHNSON MAY DRESS LIKE A MAN OF THE CLOTH, BUT HE’S ONE NUT JOB OF A FANATIC WHO’S TAKING ADVANTAGE OF YOU, AND YOUR BELIEFS, SO YOU WON’T REALIZE WHO’S REALLY THE SINNERS HERE WHICH ARE THE ALCHEMISTS WHO CREATED THE WEREWOLF CURSE…. THIS IS THE REAL REASON WHY WE’RE ALL HERE AND NOT SOME MADE UP BIBLICAL-SOUNDING NONSENSE!


PANEL 4

The angry Sandy walks away from the others as if she’s about to have a tantrum. The other’s watch her do so.


SANDY (angry and slightly having a tantrum)

I WILL NOT STAND AROUND HERE AND LISTEN TO THIS BLASPHEMY!!


SAM (annoyed and chilling)

FINE, AND IF YOU SEE THE GOOD FATHER, TELL HIM TO STOP SHOVING THE BIBLE TO OUR FACES, WILL YA?


SAM (annoyed and chilling)

I DON’T THINK GOD INTENDED FOR THAT BOOK TO BE USED FOR PURPOSES BASED ON THAT JERK’S DELUSIONS OF GRANDEUR.


PANEL 5

A part of Sam’s back/right side head is shown. James and Ralph are shown in the background and are looking at Sam with a disapproval glare.


SAM (partly shown, annoyed, and chilling)

DON’T GIVE ME THAT LOOK. I’M PROBABLY THE ONLY ONE HERE WHO’S DOING HER A FAVOR BY TELLING HER THE SIMPLE HONEST TRUTH.


RALPH (a little annoyed)

COULDN’T YOU HAVE AT LEAST TRIED TO BE A LITTLE NICE ABOUT IT WITH THE KID?


SAM (partly shown, annoyed, and chilling)

NOT REALLY.


PANEL 6

Sam is the main focus here.


SAM (chilling)

NOW THAT THE LITTLE CULT MEMBER IS OUT OF OUR FACES, FOR NOW THAT IS AND I DON’T WANT TO HEAR ABOUT HOW BADLY I TREAT HER, WE CAN GET BACK TO WHAT WE WERE TALKING ABOUT WHICH IS THE NEW “MEMBER”.


JAMES (not shown)

WHAT I HEARD FROM THE SILVER HUNTERS IS THAT THE KID’S NAME IS EDWARD MARSHEN AND HE COMES FROM A SMALL TOWN CALLED FREE FALLS. AROUND YOUR AGE I THINK.


JAMES (not shown)

THEY SAID HE WAS ATTACKED BY A RENEGADE WEREWOLF THAT THE DEPARTMENT IS LOOKING FOR RIGHT NOW AND WAS “SOMEWHAT” LUCKY TO SURVIVE SINCE WE ALL KNOW WHAT USUALLY HAPPENS AFTER THAT.


SAM (chilling)

AT LEAST WE KNOW WE GOT SOMETHING IN COMMON WITH THE NEW GUY.


RALPH (not shown)

HEH! YEAH.


PAGE 15


PANEL 1

Another view of the three.


SAM (chilling)

WHO’S GOING TO BE THE KID’S TRAINER?


RALPH (smoking)

IT’S THAT GUY MARK, THE ONE WHO’S BEEN EAGERLY WAITING FOR A WEREWOLF TO TRAIN AND STUFF. RIGHT NOW HE’S PROBABLY SO HAPPY TO HEAR THAT HE’S FINALLY GOT ONE THAT HE’S PERHAPS DOING BACK FLIPS RIGHT NOW.


SAM (chilling)

WHOOPEE, MARK FINALLY GOT THE PUPPY HE ALWAYS WANTED AND NOW IS THE HAPPIEST BOY IN THE WORLD, OR IN THIS DUMP.


JAMES (calm)

IT’S NOT AS BAD AS YOU MAKE IT SEEM TO BE, YOU KNOW.


JAMES (calm)

I’LL ADMIT THAT I WOULD RATHER BE SOMEWHERE ELSE OR BACK HOME WHERE I’M A HIGH SCHOOL TEACHER, BUT THIS ISN’T EXACTLY A PRISON.


RALPH (smoking)

YEAH, LADY, WE GET TO HAVE THOSE “FREE NIGHTS” WHERE WE CAN ROAM THE CITY WITHOUT WORRYING ABOUT GOING BEASTIE.


PANEL 2

Sam points the back of his neck.


SAM (chilling and a little annoyed)

HAVE YOU TWO FORGOTTEN THE CHIPS IMPLANTED IN THE BACK OF OUR NECKS?


SAM (chilling and a little annoyed)

NOT ONLY DO THEY ALLOW THEM TO KEEP TRACK OF US, BUT ACT AS TASERS TO KNOCK US OUT. WE’RE NOT EVEN ALLOW TO LEAVE THE CITY WHICH MAKES IT ONE HUMONGOUS PRISON FOR US TO PRETEND THAT WE’RE FREE, WHEN WE’RE NOT.


JULIE (not shown, angry, and loud)

SAM?!


PANEL 3

Julie, the woman with the snapped and highly advanced looking leash looks angry! She has the leash up next to her head to show. She’s asian.


JULIE (angry)

THIS IS THE 17TH LEASH YOU BROKE DURING OUR TRAINING SESSION, AND THAT INCLUDES THE ONES IN THE MISSIONS WHERE I ENDED UP CHASING YOU!


SAM (not shown)

UH’ HELLO, I WAS A NEAR MINDLESS ANIMAL DURING THOSE TIMES, SO WHY DO YOU EXPECT ME TO REMEMBER THEM WHEN YOU SHOULD KNOW I CAN’T?


JULIE (angry)

BECAUSE I’M TOO PISSED OFF AT YOU TO CARE!.... AND RALPH, YOU BETTER PUT THAT OUT BEFORE I SHOVE IT WHERE THE SUN DOESN’T SHINE!


PANEL 4

The angry Julie walks away from the three. Ralph is stepping on his smoke to put it out. A close view of Father Johnson’s back as he hides in the shadows with great courage.


JULIE (angry)

I SWEAR, SAM, YOU’RE A MAJOR BITCH AS A HUMAN AND A WOLF, WHICH MAKES ME WONDER HOW ANYONE CAN TELL YOUR TWO VERSIONS APART!


SAM (chilling)

YOU CAN TAKE IT OUT OF MY PAYCHECK, BUT I’M AFRAID YOU’RE GOING TO HAVE TO WAIT UNTIL ADAMS DECIDES TO ACTUALLY PAY US.


RALPH (thinks it’s funny)

AMEN TO THAT, SISTER!


PANEL 5

Father Johnson is standing next to the shadows and is carrying a bible and way he stands up shows that he believes that he’s righteous and that he’s doing God’s work by watching over these so called sinners.


SAM (not shown, chilling and depressed)

GOD, I HATE THIS PLACE.


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PANEL 1

A dramatized designed meeting room and eight men sitting in their seats next to a narrow table are partly shown because the darkness, without any lights, is mostly covering everything. The door is shown in the background.


PANEL 2

Same as panel 1, but the door opens which gives in more light into the dark room.


PANEL 3

It’s revealed to be Mister Adams who is entering the room to report to his superiors. He is carrying some files.


PANEL 4

On the other end of the narrow table, Mister Adams puts his files on the table.


PANEL 5

A close view of Mister Adams’ head and shoulders.


ALCHEMIST #1 (not shown)

DO YOU HAVE ANYTHING TO REPORT, MISTER ADAMS?


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PANEL 1

The back of Mister Adams’ is shown, while in front of him are 8 old men, Roman, Chinese, “voodoo” African, European, Greek, Indian, Muslim, and Egyptian, seated and now have some lights shinning above them. They are all looking at Mister Adams and are waiting to hear his report. They look like they believe they have absolute authority over Department S.N.


MISTER ADAMS (charming, serious, and respectful)

THAT I DO, ALCHEMISTS.


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PANEL 1

Alchemist #4 is the main focus.


ALCHEMIST #4 (arrogant, serious, and in charge)

WE HEARD NEWS THAT DOCTOR WILLIAM’S ATTEMPT TO RESURRECT A WEREWOLF WAS A SUCCESS, IS THIS TRUE?


MISTER ADAMS (not shown)

YES, ALCHEMIST #4, BUT THE PROCESS STILL NEEDS A LOT OF WORK BEFORE IT CAN REPEAT THE RESULTS AND I THOUGHT IT WOULD BE WISE IF HE FOCUSED HIS ATTENTION TO HIS OTHER WORK TO PREVENT FALL BACK ON THE MORE IMPORTANT PROJECTS.


ALCHEMIST #4 (arrogant, serious, and in charge)

YES, THAT WAS VERY WISE OF YOU INDEED.


PANEL 2

Alchemist #2 is the main focus.


ALCHEMIST #2 (arrogant, serious, and in charge)

WHAT ABOUT THE RENEGADE WEREWOLF? WE’RE STILL GETTING REPORTS THAT HE OR SHE IS STILL OUT THERE KILLING PEOPLE DURING THE NIGHTS OF THE FULL MOON.


ALCHEMIST #2 (arrogant, serious, and in charge)

I DON’T BELIEVE WE NEED TO EXPLAIN TO A GENTLEMAN OF YOUR EXPERIENCE ON HOW THIS PERSON’S PSYCHOLOGICAL PROFILE MAKES THE WOLF HALF MORE DANGEROUS THEN THE NORM.


MISTER ADAMS (not shown)

NO, ALCHEMIST #2, I, AND MY STAFF, ARE WELL AWARE OF THE SERIOUSNESS OF THE SITUATION AND ARE USING ALL THE RESOURCES AVAILABLE TO DO OUR BEST TO FIND THE TARGET BEFORE MORE LIVES ARE LOST.


ALCHEMIST #2 (arrogant, serious, and in charge)

DO MORE THEN JUST YOUR BEST, MISTER ADAMS.


MISTER ADAMS (not shown)

PLEASE, ALCHEMIST #2, EVEN WITH AN ORGANIZATION LIKE OURS, THERE’S STILL LIMITS TO WHAT WE….


PANEL 3

Alchemist #8 is the main focus and seems more open minded then the others.


ALCHEMIST #8 (cheery and open minded)

NOW, NOW, LET’S NOT EXPECT MISTER ADAMS HERE TO PULL A RABBIT OUT OF A HAT ON THIS ONE.


ALCHEMIST #2 (not shown)

ALCHEMIST #8, WE REALLY DON’T HAVE TIME FOR YOUR….


PANEL 4

The back/right side of Alchemist #8 is shown and he continues to explain his case to the other alchemists and Mister Adams.


ALCHEMIST #8 (cheery and open minded)

NEED I REMIND YOU THAT OUR ANCESTORS WERE THE ONES WHO CREATED THE VIRUS RESPONSIBLE FOR LYCANTHROPY AND LOST CONTROL OF IT WHICH HAPPENED LONG BEFORE ANY OF US WERE BORN?


ALCHEMIST #8 (cheery and open minded)

DEPARTMENT S.N. WAS FOUNDED TO FIGHT AN ENEMY WHICH IS MUCH MORE THEN ONE INSANE WEREWOLF AND WE’RE ASKING MISTER ADAMS, A VERY BUSY MAN, TO TAKE CARE OF THE PROBLEM WHEN HE HAS MORE IMPORTANT MATTERS TO DEAL WITH WHICH IS WHY WE HIRED HIM IN THE FIRST PLACE.


ALCHEMIST #8 (cheery and open minded)

AND ALCHEMIST #2, DO I HAVE TO REMIND A GENTLEMAN OF YOUR EXPERIENCE ON HOW HARD IT IS TO TRACK DOWN A WEREWOLF, ESPECIALLY ONE IN A CITY THIS BIG?


PANEL 5

Alchemist #2 is the main focus and he seems to disapprove with what Alchemist #8 just said.


ALCHEMIST #8 (not shown)

I BELIEVE MISTER ADAMS HAS A MUCH BETTER CHANCE OF FIXING THIS MESS IF WE WERE TO STOP BOTHERING HIM FOR NOT PRODUCING INSTANT RESULTS WHICH IS A BIT UNREALISTIC, WOULDN’T YOU AGREE?


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PANEL 1

The meeting is over and Alchemist #8 is with Mister Adams in a hallway.


MISTER ADAMS (charming and respectful)

ONE THESE DAYS, OLD MAN, YOUR FELLOW ALCHEMISTS WILL DECIDE THAT YOU’RE NOT WORTH KEEPING AND HAVE YOU MYSTERIOUSLY DISAPPEAR WITHOUT A TRACE, RECORDS OF YOUR EXISTENCE INCLUDED.


ALCHEMIST #8 (cheery and open minded)

HEH! HEH! THIS IS WHY I BETTER GET AS MUCH FUN OUT OF THIS WHILE I CAN!


PANEL 2

Mister Adams looks a little depressed now and Alchemist #8 tries to cheer him up.


ALCHEMIST #8 (cheerful and concern)

DON’T LET THOSE OLD MEN GET TO YOU.


ALCHEMIST #8 (cheerful and concern)

THEY EXPECT THE WORLD TO WORK MORE EFFICIENTLY AS IF THEY COULD DO A BETTER JOB, BUT DO NOTHING TO PROVE IT BECAUSE THEY’RE LIVING IN A BOX OF THEIR OWN MAKING AS THE SAID WORLD GOES ON WITHOUT THEM.


ALCHEMIST #8 (cheerful and concern)

THEY’RE JUST TOO ARROGANT TO SEE THAT.


PANEL 3

Another view of Mister Adams and Alchemist #8.


MISTER ADAMS (charming and serious)

THAT’S WHAT I’M AFRAID OF, THEY SEEM TO DEMAND NEARLY IMPOSSIBLE THINGS WITHOUT REALLY KNOWING THE SITUATION, ALTHOUGH THEY SAY THEY DO, AND SEEMLY FORGET THAT WE’RE SUPPOSE TO BE AN ORGANIZATION THAT DOESN’T OFFICIALLY EXIST.


MISTER ADAMS (charming and serious)

IF THIS KEEPS UP, THEN WE CAN EXPECT BEING ON THE SIX O’CLOCK NEWS IN NO TIME.


PANEL 4

Alchemist #8 puts his hand on Mister Adams’ shoulder.


ALCHEMIST #8 (cheerful and concern)

TRUE, BUT I ALWAYS THOUGHT YOU HAD THIS TALENT OF MAKING THINGS END IN A BETTER WAY THAT SAVES ALL OUR HIDES, AND I’M SURE YOU’LL DO IT AGAIN WHEN THE NEED RISES.


PANEL 5

Miss Carson is shown walking in a hallway.


MISTER ADAMS (not shown and word box)

TALENT YOU SAY? I ALWAYS THOUGHT OF IT AS PROOF THAT SOMEONE UP THERE IN THE HEAVENS ACTUALLY LIKE DEVILISH PEOPLE LIKE ME.


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PANEL 1

Nothing but total blackness and the sound of Edward’s shotgun that killed him is heard.


CINDY (not shown, spirit voice, frightened, and loud)

EDWARD!!!


PANEL 2

As if looking thru Edward’s eyes which are just opening, a blurry figure, Miss Carson, is shown.


PANEL 3

Same as panel 2, but the vision is still blurry, because he doesn’t have his glasses. The blurry Miss Carson, who is looking down on him, is about to put some glasses on him.


MISS CARSON (being polite)

I BELIEVE THAT THIS IS YOUR PRESCRIPTION.


PANEL 4

Same as panel 3, but Edward’s vision is now clear. Miss Carson gives out a smile.


MISS CARSON (being polite)

THERE, THAT SHOULD MAKE THINGS CLEARER FOR YOU.


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PANEL 1

Edward is lying on the floor of the room where he was resurrected and has a blanket on him. The room is a bit of a mess and the bolted to the floor table is down, as well as the advanced container that Edward was in. Miss Carson is standing up and looking down at the dazed Edward.


MISS CARSON (being polite)

WELCOME BACK TO THE WORLD OF THE LIVING, MISTER MARSHEN, AS WELL AS CONGRATULATIONS ON BECOMING A MEMBER OF DEPARTMENT S.H.


EDWARD (low tone and dazed)

WHA….?


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PANEL 1

It’s night time again, but no full moon. Two young women are walking in the park.


WOMAN #1 (a little annoyed)

AND SO I TOLD THE JOBLESS BUM TO GET OUT!


WOMAN #2 (a little annoyed)

SERVES HIM RIGHT FOR LIVING OFF YOU LIKE THAT!


WOMAN #2 (a little annoyed)

WHAT A PATHETIC EXCUSE FOR A MAN AND BOYFRIEND!


PANEL 2

A closer view of the two women.


WOMAN #1 (a little annoyed)

DON’T YOU KNOW IT! I MEAN WHY IS IT THAT ALL THE BEST-LOOKING ONES ARE USUALLY THE BIGGEST JERKS WHO….?


JEREMY (not shown, a bit loud, and annoyed)

IT’S NOT FAIR!


PANEL 3

Jeremy is shown lying on the grass with his hands behind his head for support. The two women are walking away quickly and hoping that the “crazy man” won’t notice them.


JEREMY (cool, confident, crazy, and annoyed)

WHY CAN’T THERE BE A FULL MOON FOR LIKE EVERY NIGHT?!


JEREMY (cool, confident, crazy, and annoyed)

THIS IS LIKE TOTALLY CUTTING MY FUN TIME HERE!


WOMAN #2 (nervous and low tone)

JUST KEEP WALKING AND TRY NOT TO DRAW ANY ATTENTION! ALSO KEEP YOUR PEPPER SPRAY IN HAND JUST IN CASE!


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